Empty by Michelle Boyer
Michelle Boyer

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You gazed down at the bus stop and sighed to yourself- it was empty, like everything was now. The shadows remind you of the impending night and against your will your mind brings up those numbing images of last night- who is the butcher now? I had to do it you tell yourself firmly… but somehow you wish Lillian had killed you instead of the other way around. It had ended oddly, the colonel had said his fortune would be divided amongst those in the room left alive after his death (although at the time everyone had assumed that didn’t include you) and the fortune had been granted to you as everyone else was dead. The money made you sick. You shuffle towards the bus stop to wait alone- mind spinning through an endless black void…sickening.

My last entry and final part of the story for a murder mystery Boredom Competition. For the rest of the story see my second image The Butcher (unless you don’t like violent images) and the first, Ghostly Glimpse

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bclhouse, bus, emptiness, empty, gloomy, light, lonely, shadow, shadows, stop

Comments

  • RichardV
    RichardVover 4 years ago

    Excellent capture Michelle. Love the light and the shadows.

  • Tom Gomez
    Tom Gomezover 4 years ago

    Moody shot. Looks so cold with the snow on the ground.

  • BeckyJean
    BeckyJeanover 4 years ago

    Interesting capture :)

  • mikrin
    mikrinover 4 years ago

    Great overhead shot! Love the shadowing!!

  • sleightflow
    sleightflowover 4 years ago

    And I couldn’t of written it any better myself! Man this is going to be a tough judging!

  • butchart
    butchartover 4 years ago

    great ending michelle,,,,, and great imagery both directions……….. coolness………b

  • Angela Harburn
    Angela Harburnover 4 years ago

    Very atmospheric image – great words too – don’t think I’d like to be waiting there right now!

  • Daniel Rayfield
    Daniel Rayfieldover 4 years ago

    Empty? I think not… This bus stop is actually quite full!! Great work!!!

  • Jon C
    Jon Cover 4 years ago

    Absolutely stunning art work!

  • Dana DiPasquale
    Dana DiPasqualeover 4 years ago

    Great lighting!