capturedin the curl of this shell…distant sea
ocean sea beach poetry shell haiku
For a Haiku, it’s 5,7,5 Syllables….Just to let you know for next time =D
A great number of haiku poets, translators, teachers and yes, even the ancient Masters themselves; (with vastly more knowledge on the subject than I might bring to bear here, or ever claim to possess) have, sometimes vehemently and yet most often quite reasonably, debated such a contention as you have stated. In the end, that is your opinion and I respect it, though I reserve the right to humbly disagree. After all, it’s simply poetry. But, it is my poetry. So, the real question for me then becomes: Did you enjoy it? If you did, then I thank you. If you did not, then, again, I thank you. G. Christopher Payne
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