the linen

botticcelli
Author: botticcelli
Word Count: 15
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dark, so dark,
no sounds, emptyness….
so i can
draw you in,
my absence fever.

the linen

  • wendyL

    wendyL, 2 months ago

    woa!!!!!! just a few words and I need a drink!!!! well done!

  • botticcelli

    botticcelli in reply to wendyL’s comment, 2 months ago

    refills mine, please…no ice needed..heh thank you, Lady Wendy

  • wendyL

    wendyL, 2 months ago

    LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you are welcome botti!

  • butchart

    butchart, 2 months ago

    beautiful sentiment rafael…. in the darkness we can hold things close….........b

  • Michele Randell

    Michele Randell, 2 months ago

    Sensual,evocative and romantic with so little words
    Magical Rafael !

  • botticcelli

    botticcelli in reply to butchart’s comment, 2 months ago

    well…i’m not sure about translation but i tried it….thank you so, b

  • botticcelli

    botticcelli in reply to Michele Randell’s comment, 2 months ago

    indeed so they could be…i mean …”linens”...sensual..evocatives and a kind of romantic too…just magic is about you dear Michele

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