Would you die -For the one you love

Would you die
For the one you love,
If you could just take away the instant pain
Without having them to hurt
And live with this pain each an everyday

Would you die
For the one you love,
If you could watch them laugh
And to see their face happily
Lighting up with joy

Would you die
For the one you love,
If you could hold onto them
Even longer than ever before
And to see them carefree without cause

Would you die
For the one you love,
Just so they would never have to
Never for them to have to feel like this ever again
To just take away their instant forever pain


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  • Giggly-me
    Giggly-me4 months ago

    Beautifully written … love it ;)

  • Thankyou very much

    – bluevelvetrose1

  • Donna  Hutchins
    Donna Hutchins4 months ago

    Absolutely

  • =)

    – bluevelvetrose1

  • Ocean Man
    Ocean Man4 months ago

    I can feel the passion in your words, it is the ultimate gift one can give.

  • Thankyou- it’s was a spur of the moment poem,but it’s something I’d do in a heartbeat for my family.

    – bluevelvetrose1

  • Lissie Rustage
    Lissie Rustage4 months ago

  • Thankyou =)

    – bluevelvetrose1

  • vkatt0304
    vkatt03044 months ago

    Very hard question to attempt to answer but I think you did a good job with it.

  • thankyou and yes I agree

    – bluevelvetrose1