Aunty Mill and Uncle Jack
It was a cold and windy day
Out on the weathered track,
When Aunty Mill and Aunty May
Went searching for old Jack.
He’d left his home the day before–
He hadn’t said a word,
And now he sat upon the track;
At least that’s what they’d heard.
Aunty Mill was very wide–
Her temper hot as curry;
While Aunty May was very thin–
And prone to anxious worry.
Now Aunty Mill, she liked to nag;
So Jack was mostly quiet,
But when he said his two bobs worth
It nearly caused a riot.
Mill was Uncle Jack’s “good wife,”
And May her elder sister;
Mill was praying, to herself,
That Jack had surely missed her.
The two went searching for “that brute”
As sternly as could be,
But hoped that he had not gone far–
’Twas almost time for tea.
Mill saw a man along the track–
Just sitting on the ground.
She recognised that it was Jack;
He didn’t make a sound.
“I’m willing to forgive you Jack,
Although you’ve wronged me so,
Or May will leave this house, with me”;
She stood and had her go.
Jack mumbled something to himself,
He knew that he was beat,
And after thinking on it,
Rose slowly to his feet.
He stood and slyly glanced at Mill,
Then turned and walked away
Along the track, back to the house,
To face another day.
© Michael , 2010
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Comments
I like thism job well done!!!
Thanks for the positive comments Bernie!
– Michael John
Great writing Michael very enjoyable, it really rolls along like the old style bush poetry,the only thing l am a little unsure of is why Jack left the house was it after having words with Mill ?
Thanks for the fave and the great comments Trudi….you have made my day! Regarding why Jack left in the first place? I will leave that up to the reader!!!
– Michael John
as usual great job
bobby
Thank you Bobby.
– Michael John
Nailed it! It rings of typical Aussie poetry and portrays Jack as a typical larikin husband out in the scrub.
Thanks heaps for viewing and for the fave Paul. That was the feel I was going for, so I am pleased it worked and that you recognised it!
– Michael John
A great little piece of bush poetry Mike. Love it.
Thanks for the fave Michael. Glad you like it.
– Michael John
Michael this is superb … as a lover of bush poetry (the only type really) I loved it … it flowed easy and you had me going to the end … and yes I made up my own mind as to why Jack left home … ♥
Thanks for your supportive comments Bev. Much appreciated.
– Michael John
Well done Michael!!!
Thank you Trish.
– Michael John
Congratulations, Michael. Your work has been featured in the Australian Travel Photography and Writing group 6th June 2010. Everyone loves a yarn about some poor old larikin out in the scrub…keep up the writing!
Thanks heaps for the feature and the encouragement Paul.
– Michael John
Thanks so much for submitting your great written work to The Best From Around The Barnyard Group
Thanks for accepting!
– Michael John
Congratulations!
You got a FEATURE in the Australia! You’re Standing In It Group!
Thanks heaps for the fave and the feature Vanessa. You have made my day!
– Michael John