X-ray

He sat across the table of a person he once called his best friend, now a stranger. He looked at him ordering his food and turning towards him with a question on his lips.

How ya been, old friend? How’s life been treating ya?

Well, I can’t complain… Pause.

(He lied. A lie buried behind the curtain of his eyes. A lie buried in the chaos of his yesterday. But don’t pity him even with his thousand battle scars because they are only evidence of the thousand battles won. You can collect dry tears on the battlefield of his mind. But those tears are now laughter for you, if ever you need them. You can hear memories haunting the undergrounds of his mind, but he makes them bleed now on bloodthirsty canvases. You see, he is the result of broken dreams, of lost-and-found “hims”; yes! He is that strong. He rose among the ashes of his yesterdays.)

Resume … I’ve had a thousand lives which one would you like to hear?


bloorain

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this is dedicated to a friend of mine here on RB.

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Comments

  • umbra
    umbraover 2 years ago

    i don’t know about him but this prose is that strong…very well done in craft and execution….
    namaste

  • :)

    – bloorain

  • kashmirecho
    kashmirechoover 2 years ago

    Fantastic write! =D

  • Thank you so much, Kash! Glad you think so and thanks for the fav!

    – bloorain

  • autumnwind
    autumnwindover 2 years ago

    wow – awesome write. : )) xoxoxo

  • Thank you for liking it and thanks for the fav!!!

    – bloorain

  • blueeyesbec
    blueeyesbecover 2 years ago

    Love it left me wanting more

  • Thank you Blue, glad you like it :)

    – bloorain

  • paulakerr
    paulakerrover 2 years ago

    Excellent!!!! xxxx

  • Thank you paula!!!!

    – bloorain

  • Fuego1
    Fuego1over 2 years ago

    Wonderful

  • Thank you so much! nice of you to stop by :)

    – bloorain

  • Arcadia Tempest
    Arcadia Tempestover 2 years ago

    This was was friggn out there and I loved this conceptual write of yours…
    You boldly went there first me thinks….this was absolutely excellent! :)))

  • lol thank you Karen, what a wonderful comment! Really means a lot!! And thanks for the fav!

    – bloorain

  • rubyjo
    rubyjoover 2 years ago

    a thousand lives, but those that know can see through the veiled answers… like an xray? cool write there bloorain.

  • Exactly!!! spot on and thanks for the fav!

    – bloorain

  • Ushna Sardar
    Ushna Sardarover 2 years ago

    excellent Bloo!

  • Glad you like it Ushna, And thanks for the fav!!

    – bloorain

  • Mr-E
    Mr-Eover 2 years ago

    A hell of a lot of feeling has gone into this hasn’t it?.. Your friend should be proud. Amazing piece of writing.

  • Thank you so much Mr-E, I think that everyone is a bundle of emotions. Some just hide it better than others :)

    – bloorain