He sat across the table of a person he once called his best friend, now a stranger. He looked at him ordering his food and turning towards him with a question on his lips.
How ya been, old friend? How’s life been treating ya?Well, I can’t complain… Pause.
(He lied. A lie buried behind the curtain of his eyes. A lie buried in the chaos of his yesterday. But don’t pity him even with his thousand battle scars because they are only evidence of the thousand battles won. You can collect dry tears on the battlefield of his mind. But those tears are now laughter for you, if ever you need them. You can hear memories haunting the undergrounds of his mind, but he makes them bleed now on bloodthirsty canvases. You see, he is the result of broken dreams, of lost-and-found “hims”; yes! He is that strong. He rose among the ashes of his yesterdays.)
Resume … I’ve had a thousand lives which one would you like to hear?
Comments
i don’t know about him but this prose is that strong…very well done in craft and execution….
namaste
:)
– bloorain
Fantastic write! =D
Thank you so much, Kash! Glad you think so and thanks for the fav!
– bloorain
wow – awesome write. : )) xoxoxo
Thank you for liking it and thanks for the fav!!!
– bloorain
Love it left me wanting more
Thank you Blue, glad you like it :)
– bloorain
Excellent!!!! xxxx
Thank you paula!!!!
– bloorain
Wonderful
Thank you so much! nice of you to stop by :)
– bloorain
This was was friggn out there and I loved this conceptual write of yours…
You boldly went there first me thinks….this was absolutely excellent! :)))
lol thank you Karen, what a wonderful comment! Really means a lot!! And thanks for the fav!
– bloorain
a thousand lives, but those that know can see through the veiled answers… like an xray? cool write there bloorain.
Exactly!!! spot on and thanks for the fav!
– bloorain
excellent Bloo!
Glad you like it Ushna, And thanks for the fav!!
– bloorain
A hell of a lot of feeling has gone into this hasn’t it?.. Your friend should be proud. Amazing piece of writing.
Thank you so much Mr-E, I think that everyone is a bundle of emotions. Some just hide it better than others :)
– bloorain