Deja VU

bloorain
Author: bloorain
Word Count: 83
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Deja VU

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Je t’ai deja vu = I already saw you

ici meme= in this very moment

Deja VU belongs to the following groups:

! Creative Writing & Poetry !, All Out Emotion, Flash Fiction, Freedom In Words & Art, Inspired By Life, Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, The Red Writing Room, The Sensual Word, Up & Coming Writers and Vibration in Art and Verse - VAVoom!

“Déjà vu”, she said, on the lonely stage of the somber café, “je t’ai déjà vu.” I don’t speak her language, but I understand everything she is saying. “Déjà vu”, she gestured, her sensual voice touching every lonely men in the audience. “ici meme,” she said “ je t’ai déjà vu,”… “Sitting on this very chair,” I whispered, without ever knowing the words before, “on this very night”… “Je t’ai déjà vu!” she exclaimed, looking dead at me.

  • IzzyGumbo

    IzzyGumbo

    I don’t know what kind of ‘mojo’ you put into this write but WOW… did you reach out and touch someone! An instant fave! Exceptional.

  • bloorain replied

    your compliment is too much, really! I was undecided on whether I should share this or not because of the french portion, but I’m glad you liked it, and thanks for the fav!

  • aaeiinnn

    aaeiinnn

    if i could remember my handful of french words i still would be lost think i am tired but i needed my fix of bloo
    x annie

  • bloorain replied

    awww lol. I wrote the meaning in the description :) It’s always nice when you stop by!

  • paulakerr

    paulakerr

    magique et mystérieuse, c’est très bon!! Le chant est répétitif. At-elle oublié les paroles?xxx :))))))

  • bloorain replied

    merci! Je ne savais pas que tu parlais francais. non, elle n’a pas oublie les paroles. L’homme les a repete en meme tant qu’elle :)

  • Charma Chircop

    Charma Chircop

    TRES JOLIE MONSIEUR,,Magnifique-You saw her and touched her ,i guess..-Charma:)

  • bloorain replied

    merci!! Charming Charma, The speaker was at a show and somehow knew the words of the perfoming lady without ever knowing them before. Then, It goes a little deeper…:)

  • cosimopiro

    cosimopiro

    Love that feeling it gives…...recognition.

  • bloorain replied

    It sure does! Always nice to hear from you :)

  • Matt Penfold

    Matt Penfold

    I think I already read this ;-)

  • bloorain replied

    Ah! ah! Perfect “deja vu” example. it’s possible that I already replied to your comment ;)

  • Goldenspirit

    Goldenspirit

    Nice write. Oh those French gals. :)

  • bloorain replied

    Tell me about it :) Thanks for stopping by, always appreciated!

  • erich biemer

    erich biemer

    i know i’ve read this before…....

  • bloorain replied

    lol no you were caught in the matrix!

  • Mardra

    Mardra

    Swweeet.

  • bloorain replied

    Thank you!

  • paulakerr

    paulakerr

    I’m always reminded of a scene from “Top Secret” the movie whenever I see the words, Deja vu. It’s a wonderful slick comedy with Val Kilmer. A character in the movie is named “Deja Vu” and there is a scene of goodbyes (Much like in “Alice in Wonderland” when she is saying goodbye to everyone.) In “Top Secret” someone says “and I’ll remember you most of all Deja Vu”. Au revoir et Je vous rappelle le plus de tous Deja vu xxx :)))))

  • bloorain replied

    I have never seen this movie before, but I’m quite interested to now that you have mentioned this

  • ArcadiaTempest

    ArcadiaTempest

    I had to come back….to be remember the first time I read this before I saw it…
    It was maybe that in me that wants to be more in the moment ….to be really ready to arrive without being late for the beginning of something I know was happening before I got there….
    I think I better stop cos I am in the maze right now and need to get some kip…..so I can wake up and be back where I started…. ;)

  • bloorain replied

    woooow! your comment is amazing! lol it could be a whole entry on its own. Surely made my day! And it’s weird because I wrote this piece before thinking of it :)

  • ArcadiaTempest

    ArcadiaTempest

    LOL ….I knew that!

  • bloorain replied

    lmao ( I dont think that expression is allowed in RB, I think I just violated proper RB etiquette, but you probably already knew I would, didn’t you?)

  • ArcadiaTempest

    ArcadiaTempest

    I am getting a little muddled by knowing what was said before said what we are saying to each other….perhaps I should leave a word trail to follow..hmmm but the trail has already led me back to the start again where you had just been as you passed by heading towards the end of our thoughts….

    We could end up somewhere sometime in the middle me thinks :)

  • bloorain replied

    “heading towards the end of our thoughts”......where I will meet you again. Don’t you see? We know this because we have been there times and times before :)

  • ArcadiaTempest

    ArcadiaTempest

    Yikes ….. you are in my mind…..scoot….on room enough for one me thinks. You are a good thinking me thinks….See you when…well you know when don’t you! x

  • bloorain replied

    lmao, I do :)

  • IzzyGumbo

    IzzyGumbo

    I keep coming back to read this one… Deja YOU? again! A delight to my eyes :)

  • bloorain replied

    lol, thank you! that is the best compliment ever :)

  • IzzyGumbo

    IzzyGumbo

    If you just ‘be’ in place, no chase before or back to for, in a word and inward, I would think you’re in the VU of the Days ja? ;)

  • bloorain replied

    ja! that is probably the correct probability :)

  • IzzyGumbo

    IzzyGumbo

    VU the view, I view You VU.ing too! You’re amazing and brilliant and I love to read you :)

  • bloorain replied

    and I am Vu.ing you :) thanks for the sweet comment

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