Violin
inspired by …...a locust :)
Violin belongs to the following groups:
! Creative Writing & Poetry !, All Around the Styles, All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Art For The World, Freedom In Words & Art, Inspired By Life, Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, Short stories - Spherical Scriptings, The Red Writing Room, The Sensual Word, Up & Coming Writers and Vibration in Art and Verse - VAVoom!I woke up with the whisper of the morning, when the trees sway with a lazy hush. I walked on the sweaty grass, on everlasting green. And I sat next to the wise old tree, source of my inspiration, keeper of my muse.
She sang visual emotions in my ears. She seduced my mind with poetic stories, and unlikely encounters. And the wind added rhythm to the joints of her hips as she danced in the corner of my eyes.
But wait….a hop here, and a hop there.
A brown locust, with the least of worries, dared to wander so close to my feet. It did well to scare off my muse, hollow my thoughts.
My heart pumped anger through my veins. And as I was about to crush the life out of him, he spread out his wing, rubbed his foot against it, and out came a song.
He said, “Hear my plea, hear the song I play, the symphony to which you sleep night after night.
erich biemer 29 days ago
lovely…..
bloorain replied 29 days ago
Thank you so much!
trwoody 29 days ago
So quick we are to become aggravated with the intrusions in our plans. As you point out it is ironic that those little intrusions are the true pleasures of life
bloorain replied 29 days ago
indeed, we take a lot of things for granted! love your insight!
paulakerr 29 days ago
Such a little cutie! I love this. xxx
bloorain replied 29 days ago
:) thank you!! glad you like it!
aaeiinnn 29 days ago
sigh
in fact
deep sigh
bloo my dear you are gaining in your ability to mold the words to capture the reader
well done x
bloorain replied 28 days ago
Annie your comments always make me smile. I have been aching to write this, I’m glad I did :)
cosimopiro 29 days ago
Strange isn’t it…..that we become so self absorbed sometimes that we miss out on the most miraculous events. Great read.
bloorain replied 28 days ago
You are right; we miss out on a lot! It is sometimes those little things that changes an ok day to a great day!
Mari1980 28 days ago
A true testament that you can find beauty anywhere…when you least expect it.
great read.
- mari
bloorain replied 28 days ago
so true, Mari. Nature does have beautiful surprises :)
gretchen . 28 days ago
So beautiful bloorain, I felt every sway and hush… :-)
bloorain replied 28 days ago
I’m glad you did! nature is a shared gift :)
Coronus 26 days ago
gorgeous!!!!!!!
bloorain replied 26 days ago
Thanks for the lovely comment, and thanks for the fav!
ArcadiaTempest 25 days ago
This was a soothing croon of a read….really lovely writing…X
bloorain replied 24 days ago
Thank so much for liking it, means a lot coming from you :)
Charma Chircop 23 days ago
I love this melody of the violin playing notes in verses and whispering all way through..Beautiful—Charma
bloorain replied 23 days ago
and I love your comment! made me smile. glad you like it :)
beast 16 days ago
Its such a pleasure to read your writing, the flow and feel of the words really is beautiful
bloorain replied 16 days ago
Thank you so much, it means a lot :) and thanks for the fav!
erika15 15 days ago
oh ….this is so delightful!
bloorain replied 15 days ago
Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the fav, means a lot!
Candy Bais 15 days ago
simply wonderful…
bloorain replied 14 days ago
Thank you! I’m glad you liked it :)