...treat...
have you spot the two hidden messages in this piece? one is from me to you (bloo), the second is from the the speaker.
...treat... belongs to the following groups:
! Creative Writing & Poetry !, Flash Fiction, Freedom In Words & Art, The Red Writing Room, Twisted Tales and Vibration in Art and Verse - VAVoom!Have you ever had the impression that something is watching you? You can almost see it in the corner of your “eye”, but wHen you turn, it Always disaPPears. It alwaYs happens wHen you’re Alone, doesn’t it? And it’s a dark, undistinguished figure, isn’t it?
Some say that they’ve seen it, a face frozen in horror, a tortured dark figure. But you and I both “can” teLL that it’s a lie.
In fact, they are hell and heaven spawned spies, sent here tO report your every action, those that Will damn or set you frEE when judgmeNt day comes. Your mere existence is in their hands. So if you ever “see” them…..if ever….. I shake at the thought of this fatal consequence. There isn’t an earthly torture that can match it.
I’m telling “you” this because you’ve been wondering….and I’ve been watching.
Matt Roberts
I don’t see it O.O
bloorain replied
sorry! I couldn’t figure out the bold text, so I just put cap letters ;(
aaeiinnn
OOOH YOU ARE NAUGHTY
I GUESS THIS ONE IS FOR HALLOWEEN
SUITABLY SPOOKY
bloorain replied
Thank you! Annie, sorry for the mess earlier :(
aaeiinnn
MESS?
what did i miss?
have not been here long
bloorain replied
oh! I was doing some editing :)
Goldenspirit
Happy halloween to you to. :)
bloorain replied
ha! ha! yay! :)
Matt Roberts
Ooh ooh, I got it. You too :D
bloorain replied
thank you for stopping by always appreciated. Did you find the second one? (from the “speaker”)
IzzyGumbo
this is awesome! Happy happy indeed!! :)
bloorain replied
Thank you! so much :) did you spot the other one?
Jane17
freaky.. but gripping… nice writing..
bloorain replied
thank you so much! I’m glad you liked it
IzzyGumbo
eYes ;) u2 my friend … very very clever!
bloorain replied
ha! ha! great ‘eye” lol, thank you !
paulakerr
Hey Bloo, yeah it is similar, in fact spookily similar to my “Roxanne-In Hindsight” Chapter 2 beginning, but hey, you know what, all things are possible in this spooky world. Time and Space can create all kinds of spooky things. Very nice read by the way :)))))
bloorain replied
I know! it is spooky because I had just written it, lol. Anyway, I’m glad that you like it. and I miss your multiple smiles lol
Matt Roberts
Eye Can See You :p
bloorain replied
no you can’t (lol) thank you for stopping by I hope this didn’t distract too much from the actual story :)
gemini63
I can see you too happy haloween :))
bloorain replied
lol, happy Halloween, glad that you stopped by :)
paulakerr
:0) :0) :0)
IzzyGumbo
;)
iCu2ootles cute ‘nuff!... you write great stuff ;)
bloorain replied
again thank you so much!!
erich biemer
the watcher is being watched…..
bloorain replied
now that’s overkill :)
Charma Chircop
I can feel you watching…:)Charma
bloorain replied
Then you should put on a show, lol :) Thanks for stopping by !
Teacup
Hope you had a Happy Halloween...!! a good tale for a dark night…
bloorain replied
ha ha! thanks, and I’m glad you enjoyed it!
Zolton 18 days ago
Ha ha… hope your Halloween was good. : )
bloorain replied 18 days ago
it was thank you for stopping by :)