Validation
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! Creative Writing & Poetry !, All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Flash Fiction, Freedom In Words & Art, Inspired By Life, Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, The Community of Erotic Submission (approval required), The Red Writing Room, The Sensual Word, Up & Coming Writers and Vibration in Art and Verse - VAVoom!She twisted her fingers. He looked at the envelope and sighed. The silver blade of the scissors ran along the white edges. There was anxiety in her eyes. There was fear in his. He reached nervously and pulled out the letter.
Another rejection!
Baby, it’s ok.
No! No it isn’t! I’m no writer. I just…
We’ll try again; don’t worry.
No! Who I’m I kidding? I’m just not good enough!
He sat on the bed, pale blue, his mind lost in the letter. Her fingers ran through his hair, felt the scars of his brain. She grabbed the letter and tore it. With a finger on his worried lips, she climbed the bed and slowly undressed. When she finished, with that same finger, she gently pushed his chin to close his mouth, and said
I’m your blank sheet, write me a story!
Charma Chircop
wow..that blanket sheet,hope you wrote her a book:)sweet poem indeed-Charma
bloorain replied
Ha! ha! ” a book”. your comment is funny. thank you for the kind words
erich biemer
sensual rejection at that…..
bloorain replied
I’m glad you “smelt ” it :)
-Lilith-
Clever… Love it!
bloorain replied
thank you!! means a lot!
Chaharra Gilman
hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii lol im chaharra aka cha
(shay)
n2mu love this work and welcome to the area ;)
youll have alot more feedback if you give ppl comments as well :)
bloorain replied
thank you!
Coronus
This was excellent!!!!!
bloorain replied
thank you! and thanks for the fav I truly appreciate it!!
aaeiinnn
whoosh
glad i didn’t miss that one
i am a compulsive bloo fan now
bloorain replied
ha! ha! yay! I have a fan. celebrating . thank you so much!!
IzzyGumbo
nice! :) I just had a visit to your blog also… it’s official that I’m a fan too, your writing is so bold… so refreshing and in some cases, wonderfully shocking! :)
bloorain replied
lol wow I am overwhelmed! unfortunately, I don’t update my blog much anymore because of RB lol, but I really need to write another “real” short story :)
Mari1980
wow… that’s great.
lovely ending—nice soft landing.
bloorain replied
Thanks means a lot to me, in more ways than one :)
colorblind
WHOOOOOOOAAAAA THIS TRULY MAD ME SAY…...”ALRIGHT NOW ….DING DING DING ….WE HAVE A WINNER …COLORBLIND IF YOU DON’T PUT THIS REMARKABLE WRITER ON YOUR WATCHLIST YOU ARE INSANE ” ....NICE i love this….no i lurrrveeess this….truly nice and what a piece love the part where it gets to she ran her fingers thru his hair and felt the scars of his brain all the way to the end….all around a thumbs up in my book
bloorain replied
wow thank you, I never had a cool picture as a comment before! This comment made me smile! thanks for the fav! ha! that’s probably the most thank yous, I ever had to say in a single comment :) oh yea and thanks for watching, lol