Crying wolves
Crying wolves belongs to the following groups:
! Creative Writing & Poetry !, All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Flash Fiction, Freedom In Words & Art, Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, THE DARK CELL, The Red Writing Room, Twisted Tales, Up & Coming Writers and Vibration in Art and Verse - VAVoom!“Mommy! mommy!” Alex said excitingly, “I have to tell you what happened today!” Tell me, she said as she went through his bag. “You know Adam, the new kid? He came with a gun in class and…” What! Shirley yelled, her eyes wide opened. “Yea,” continued the little boy a bit startled by his mom’s reaction, “ and he shot me, right in the head.” She sighed.
The following day, on the ride back home , Alex looked at his mom and said, “Mommy, do you know what Adam did today, in front of the teacher?” What did he do, darling? said Shirley focused on the road. “He took a gun and shot me in the head.” Alex, stop saying that! she screamed furiously, you hear me! Don’t ever say that again!
The next day, Shirley received a phone call from the police about a shooting at school. Her son was found dead, shot in the head.
Matt Roberts
Eerie. Gave me goosebumps :s Good writing.
bloorain replied
heed the warning…..or have goosebumps. Thank you !
aaeiinnn
yes eerie is a suitable description
bloorain replied
I think so too, I’ll add that as a tag. thanks for the comment!
Bruce Miller
Horrid irony. How grim. I love it!!
bloorain replied
I’m glad you like it!
Zolton
Oh no! Grim indeed. Nice Flash Fiction!
bloorain replied
thank you for your comment, means a lot!
colorblind
whoa …another good read….lol got off a work a some time ago…and dove str8 into your pieces….lol …glad i did,....loves it
bloorain replied
ha! ha! I think your comment surpasses this piece! truly means a lot!! Now I’m afraid to disappoint, lol