Mad man
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! Creative Writing & Poetry !, All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Flash Fiction, Freedom In Words & Art, Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, The Red Writing Room, Twisted Tales, Up & Coming Writers and Vibration in Art and Verse - VAVoom!Dear diary,
Today was fantastic! I had a great time… except when I met Philip at the park that is. (With his girlfriend!) yes, with his girlfriend. You see, my dearest, Philip and I used to be best of friends. (Until she came along!). She came along and ruined that. I don’t really like her much. (She hates us!). Well, I certainly don’t appreciate her! (She despises us!) My! well who does she think she is? Philip and I were better off. (We should kill her) ...Excuse me, my dear, I won’t be long.
sunsette15
Something all of us could probably relate to, are you going to keep up with the Diary installments? Would make for a great idea.
This was a great read and welcome to rb! = D
bloorain replied
I haven’t decided, but that would be a good idea. and thank you, I like RB so far!!
gemini63
This leaves me wondering if you and he are just good friends and she is jealous or you are wishing your friendship was something more ? a very good thought provoking write :))
bloorain replied
It is certainly open for interpretation, but let me point out that there are two speakers in this piece. thank you for the kind words! -Blue
kashmirecho
This was a fun read, definitely made me smile and snicker! :)
bloorain replied
I’m happy it mad you smile…...and snicker, lol -Blue
Mari1980
This made me laugh out loud!!! .... ( not conducive to the workplace.)
great write!
love the Rants of a mad man!
-maribloorain replied
well maybe I should post it as “NSFW on account of possible lulz).
I’m glad you liked it :) – Blue
F.A. Moore
I suppose the two parties are the same person BUT 2 different personalities. We shall see, I guess.
Truly, who can’t relate to being torn between niceties and realities of emotion! :D
bloorain replied
lol, that’s true. I hope never to that extent!
zekrey
Possibly a contrast between what the writer is saying and what he is really thinking. Love it.
bloorain replied
It’s possible, after all he doesn’t seem too “stable”. thanks for sharing your thoughts -Blue
gretchen .
Great portrayal of those inner moments only a diary sees ;-) !!
bloorain replied
I would go further and add, only a diary “should ever” see, lol. thank you!
Bruce Miller
Mad indeed! Oh well ya gotta do what ya gotta do..
bloorain replied
I hope he doesn’t, lol.
erich biemer
dear mad man,
part of me sees no madness here and the other…well you’ll here him when he parks the howitzer on your front yard…...
bloorain replied
ha ha your comment made me laugh. it’s funny that you wrote “dear mad man” when it’s obvious the mad man is…..the other you lol
Cassidy JK (Ra...
I love this. A bit of madman in us all. (Some have more than a bit.)
bloorain replied
I, for one, won’t deny that :) I’m glad you liked it
Charma Chircop
This made me smile,you seem too kind to kill..Yet on the other hand yes its a pity when a person come into our lives and chage it upside down..some women and men are so posessive they dont give their buddies or girls a chance to breath..its a pity when one lose a good friend cos of another third party..excellent work Bloorain..:)Charma
bloorain replied
:) I’g glad you liked it! And yes it is inconvenient. Please note, however, that I am not the madman :)
Zolton
Ha ha… short, but I like it!
bloorain replied
:) glad you did, means a lot