Jail...bait
Ha! You fell for it!
Now that I have your undivided attention, consider this…
As a writer you have the power, for mere seconds at times, to hold your readers captive. Drawn like moth to the light, and unwary of the fate you have chosen for their hungry minds. You are the warden of the prison you’ve created. You can torture them with erotic lines of pleasure. You can make your words sing and watch their soul quiver. You can poke at their emotions and squeeze the tears from their bleeding eyes. You can run a light shiver through their spines and infest their mind with scary thoughts. You can do wonders! You can plunge them in your world and suffocate them with your imagery. You can scream out the sorrows of love and whisper the joy of togetherness. You can do miracles! I’m sorry if I overwhelm you, it’s just that I am looking at limitless possibilities.
And so my question is simple, o warden, what, if anything, will it be?
erich biemer
someone needs a spanking me thinks…..
bloorain replied
I fear for your “prisoners” lol
erich biemer
whatever lolita…..
paulakerr
Jolly good essay!
bloorain replied
means a lot coming from you. You’ve imprisoned me with you thrillers and very well written stories.
paulakerr
Mmm I might have a new one for you. A short story…keep an eye out for “The Gift”. “)
bloorain replied
I’m already hooked :)
aaeiinnn
today i am working backwards
this was here [unread by me]prior to my comment
re your writing bloo
wow
annie x
bloorain replied
lol well you still got to it, and that’s what matters. Thanks for stopping by :)
cosimopiro
Well, you have captured me. I think maybe…..yep, release all the prisoners and let them run amuck!! A little poetic anarchy never did any harm.
bloorain replied
You should know :) I love your style of writing! Thanks for the fav!
IzzyGumbo
Bravo! Magic markers for everyone! ;) I loved your energy in this one Bloo. Well done!
bloorain replied
Thank you Izzy!! Miss-I-will-make-your-brain-bleed-with-my-puzzles. Every times I read one of your pieces I feel like a detective lol. Thanks again for stopping by :)
Matt Penfold
Whatever comes to mind or flows from the mind…
bloorain replied
ha! the mysterious writer. I will have to be cautious next time I read one of your entries ;)
Zolton 29 days ago
Ha ha… indeed!
bloorain replied 28 days ago
Glad you agree:)
Charma Chircop 23 days ago
i love debaiting with you bloorain:)Whatever:)..here i am screaming out the sorrows..can you hear the vibe in your ear:)and here i am whispering my joy softly….:)Charma
bloorain replied 23 days ago
lol I can hear it loud and clear :) And your whisper is even clearer, Charming
Tempe 21 days ago
wonderful piece. thanks for sharing, edgy, i like it.
bloorain replied 21 days ago
I am glad you like it :) I was looking at your portfolio and I must I really like your black and whites. They have so much depth. Again thank you for your lovely comment :)