you
You are a beautiful complication
No word is your definition
I see you and all your visions
and yet understanding you seems like an impossible mission.
There are no limitations
i know i have your permission
Yet such is the condition
I cannot give you the satisfaction
Of my submission.
You truly are a messy creation
A crazy fascination
A brilliant production
I can’t stop the attraction
or deny this infatuation
i think ……………
you may be an obsession
my latest fixation
but…….
i will follow my intuitions
and so……….
is the reason for my decision
Comments
o wow !!!!!! thank you thank you thank you!!!!
– blackvixen
You my dear are beautiful. Wow, first thing I said when I clicked on your link!! Lovely write too. I really like that, describes lots of people.
aaaww thank you ….you make blush and that is not easy for an indian haha..thanks for takin time to read my work and even comment on it…you yourself look like a very pretty woman…thank again ya tc :))))
– blackvixen
fair enough;)
;))))))))
– blackvixen
reminds me of “beautiful disaster” by kelly clarkson
yea it actually does….hahaha
– blackvixen
Excellent!
thank you! thank you!thank you!! :)))))))))))))))))
– blackvixen
feelings of intesne infactuation, intrigue and uncertainty…gorgeous poem!
thank you very muc jono
– blackvixen
Intense poem, full of contradictions and infatuation. Love it. Congrats on the features.
yea it is an intense poem isnt it…well my feelings are intense too…thank you for your time and comments :)))
– blackvixen
Great Write, I think it about sums up most of us, yes really a great write Barry
thanx Berry!!!
– blackvixen
wow… gurl… u just got it ,,, absolutely creative n bravo…
thank you grl
– blackvixen
Wonderful words! I love it!
thanx silvercircles….love ur name btw
– blackvixen