I undress all that you don on me
I undress all that you don on me belongs to the following groups:
Complex Simplicity of Art, ! Creative Writing & Poetry !, Core [C.O.R.E], Freedom In Words & Art, Light In The Darkness and Nirvana (Only 1 photographic art and 1 written work will be accepted per day )I don’t want no drama
I don’t want no mess
I just wanna leave
I just want peace
Tears have been wasted
For feelings …..unwanted
Fear of losing
So consuming
No more believing
Or fantasizing about something,
that’s never happening
I keep dreaming
Dreaming
Dreaming
Dreaming
Hope for happiness…..blinding
Can’t see the naked truth standing….
Right in front of me so obvious and striking
I keep hoping
Hoping
Hoping
Hoping
Hoping has left me hopeless
Now I am hopeless but I care less
I don’t give a fucking fuck about the heartless
For the heartless cares less
About me or my madness
So I undress all that you don on me
Leaving it here….just letting it be
There is no point, you see….
I know you will never see
So I undress all that you don on me
I am gonna let you just be….
linaji
fuck I am so all over this one.. BRILLIANT WORK!!!! I HAVE READ THIS THREE TIMES ALREADY!!!! YOU READIN MY MIND GIRRRL?
linaji
I HOPE YOU ARE IN FREEDOM IN WORDS AND ART.. CAUSE I WOULD LIKE TO FEATURE THIS.
blackvixen replied
I am linaji….
blackvixen
I dnt know linaji…....i guess great minds think alike….hehehe watever it is am glad i caught ur attention with this one….
RuthFroehlinger
I love it. I think it’s brilliant.
blackvixen
thank you sooooo much…...am glad u liked it
love
renee
RosaCobos
The right way….
pain is a hard skin…
with pins inside…
better be undressed of it..
leaving a raw flesh…
that will cure…
with licking tongue’s balsam…
if no one is caressing me…
I will…with my own hand-soul
Rosa
blackvixen replied
pain is a hard skin with pins inside …true… very true thank you rosa
Graham Mewburn
I think it’s very sad
If my Irene felt this way I would be devastated
if your life is always like this
ask yourself
what is the constant feature
“Sucessful people take responsibility for their lives
failures blame others”
This maxim is always true
cheers
Gray
blackvixen replied
am glad your irene has you,gray…..she is alucky woman….tanx for your comments ya …
Songwriter
Fine emotional and logical picture with words. I identify fully. Great work. :0) Song
blackvixen replied
tank you soooo much song…rilly appreciate it…..
linaji
blackvixen replied
o ma gaaawwwwwwwwd tank u tank u tank u inaji…..
Gregory John O...
Great piece !!
blackvixen replied
tank you very much….gregory
MaryK
Great! I can relate to this work.
blackvixen
m glad you cn relate to this mary K…....but sory you had go thru wateva you wen true…..tanx for the comments ya…
Graham Mewburn
I note that you hope for happiness
Happiness comes from within
A glass that is half-empty is also half-full
You choose how you view it.
Try to be a Gold Miner
A goldminer digs through a mountain of rock
He turns his back on the mountain of rock
Opens his hand and gazes upon the few pieces of gold he found
He then goes to his favourite watering hole and sees his mates
He doesn’t talk about the mountain of rock
He shows them the specks of gold
Everyone has more rocks in their lives than gold
What will you focus on?
cheers
Gray and Irene
blackvixen replied
I ges ure right happines does come frm within…...tanx lots graham ma lov to irene ya….
Shoaib .
this is raw and awesome
blackvixen replied
hey there,tnx shoaib…..
EDGYONE
i havent been around much,i see your still writting with power and emotion while shooting streight and true.congrats on the feature,randy
LucifersChic
aww nice 1 gurl.. full of emotions.. so deep n intense.. i lyk :)
Sally Omar
You are amazing…awesome piece!!!!!!!!!!!!! xoxoxoxo
blackvixen replied 10 days ago
thank you soo much i appreciate it very muc..:)
blueeyesbec 11 days ago
I love this
blackvixen 10 days ago
i am so glad u do bleeyesbec