LOVE......
LOVE...... belongs to the following groups:
! Creative Writing & Poetry !, Core [C.O.R.E], Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Freedom In Words & Art, Light In The Darkness and Masterpieces: Literary WorkshopLove is a terrible thing
It burns your soul like flames of fire
It turns into a being with no desire
It makes your heart weak and your mind tired
Sometimes it even turns you into a liar
knowing this, we keep falling in love
for we are weak beings, we need to love and be loved
though many times we have been burned by the fire of love
we just never learn, we are blinded by the short sweetness of love
we even deny the fact of the truth for love
LOVE robs your sensibilities
turns you into fool with no mental capabilities
weakens your soul and leaves no peace
Its funny how it makes you go against your own believes
love may give life but it also KILLS…….
Alice McMahon ...
This reminds me of my latest work – “Playing With Fire” wow.
blackvixen replied
o really ??? thanks for reading my work and spending your time to comment on ma poem..thank u soo much
colorblind
love this
you came raw with this
love may give life but it also kills
you had many well contructed lines
wonderful writing
blackvixen replied
thank you very much colorblind…I appreciate your comment…:))))
Shoaib .
“for we are weak beings, we need to love and be loved”
SO damn TRUE
such is my weakness
such is my strength
PEACE OUT cub scout
blackvixen replied
tanx shoaib….i rilly appreciate ure comments…
Philosophy Lee
bv… I respectfully disagree.
I believe Love is the totality of all there is, and it is the greatest of co-teachies (a word/concept I’ve created)... we are all learning from each other… and I believe there is one for everyone… be yourself and you will find… that’s the theory…
Very well written!
blackvixen replied
tanx philosophy lee i rilly do apreciate ur comment…..I hope ur right …i rilly i rilly do :))))))
Cassey
Well written, although I don’t believe. The only love that kills is the kind you don’t need. True love, albeit hard to find, nurtures, teaches, embraces…........
blackvixen replied
i hope one day i wud be able to say that too cassidy…...tanks for your comment ya :))))
xxbloodloverxx
This is a very good peice you’ve written. _ Keep it up. I really like this one.
blackvixen replied
thank you very much …m glad you like it…..
RuthFroehlinger
I can so relate to this – having been burned many times over myself. Fortunately, I’ve realised, what a fool I was and that true love throws a happier, merrier, more peaceful, more respectful light on things.
I love the way you write
blackvixen replied
thank you sooo very much Ruth,for your time and appreciation….it means alot to me
love
renee
Sally Omar
Definitely awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xoxoxoxoxo
blackvixen replied 2 days ago
thank you sooo very much…..
wingsoffire
Yes, love burns and once the gray ashes settle we are right back in it trying it again!!! Playing the fool all over again. This is a wonderful read!
blackvixen replied 2 days ago
yesi dnt know why but we just seem to not learn and love is so irresistable and inevitable…