MUSIC
MUSIC belongs to the following groups:
! Creative Writing & Poetry !, Core [C.O.R.E], Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Freedom In Words & Art, Light In The Darkness and Masterpieces: Literary WorkshopI give myself to you…..
Take me on that ride,that I love so much
You electrify me with your power
Makin me go insane like the love of a lover
When you are here with me and around me,
I am in trance….you are my solace,
You are the fire that burns inside of me
you bring out the lion that sleeps witthin me
you come and galvanize me
When I move,you move inside of me
Every rhythm and beat i feel,
I feel it on my skin,in my muscle and limbs
I feel it in my soul,i feel it in my mind like a dream
And then…. suddenly i am alive and I am freed
Such an overwhelming feeling it is….
So magical like some kind of drug or like a kiss
feeling all fuzzy and warm inside.
it is soo many feelings all at the same time
The exitement I feel…It is unbelivable soo out of this world
you are more beautiful than a mother pearl
You give me that rush …...
that addreline rush that i love so much
With you.. I am in my element
With you.. i am in my place…..safe
You get me so high like extacy….with you, I go insane
You flow inside of me like blood flows trough my veins
you are a part of me
I need you like the air I breath
You bring out the real Me
The Me that hides
in absence of your presence
You make my insticts sharp…
sharper than a razor blade
I move intuitively,automatically
letting your current flow in me
letting you move me ,navigate me.
You showed me what I can do
you made me believe
You inspire me too
you make my words flow,flow so beautifully
My life long friend
The love of my life
Saviour of my soul…...
MUSIC
silverstrummer...
Wow a kindrid spirit of musicality this is so real and sensual I felt every movement right down the scales of pleasures! Beautifully written I am in awe of such a fantastic piece as this! – David
blackvixen replied
Thank you so much david….music sure is a big part of me ,cnt live with out it…everything i wrote is everytihng i feel…
Shoaib .
brilliant… i feel the same way about music !
awesome writing
blackvixen replied
aaaaw thank you handsome….am glad you liked it..
linaji
You bring out the real Me
The Me that hides
in absence of your presence
You make my insticts sharp…
sharper than a razor blade
I move intuitively,automatically
letting your current flow in me
letting you move me ,navigate me.
What stunning writing..so good to meet you!
blackvixen replied
The pleasure is all mine…..am honoured that you have read my work and left acomment…...thank you soooo much linaji…...
Astoreth
wow vix….i was just thinking ‘man she’s got it really bad’ because i thought you were on about a man….lol…..music!!! oh, i really love music too….excellent chirp of a love-song to music!! xx
blackvixen replied
hehehehe so far I have not met any man that could make me feel that way darlin….thank you soo much for your comment ,I trully…trully appreciate it …..
Enivea
Hits the note for me! Well done and welcome to RB:-))
blackvixen
Thank you so much Envinea!!!! m sooo happy you liked my work do feel free to leave your comments for all the others too… :)))
LucifersChic
hey really luv d way u wrote thiz gurl.. n i know how music makes u feel.. i’m seen it takin control ova u wink
blackvixen replied
aaawww thank u soo much…u know it allrite hehehe
jacqleen
Beautiful….......Sensual….........and HONEST!!! loved every word!!!
blackvixen replied
thank you soo much…..i am glad you liked it..
Leon Walker
Yes music has incredible power. This is a fantastic piece of descriptive writing!!!
blackvixen replied
yeeeesss it trully does…..thanks Leon for your comment…i appreciate it so very much…
Philosophy Lee
Just cuz I dance like a white person (which I am),
doesn’t mean I appreciate music any less…
another great piece bv! :)
blackvixen replied
any music any dance it is all the same as long as u dance and listen…tanx philosophy lee for your comments
Shswan
The stunning thing about this piece is that it is so multi-layered. It’s not JUST the lover, or even JUST the MUSIC (which, of course, IS the THING…SMILE…), but it’s love and life and it’s also a poem about the current of YOU YOURSELF, the Poet, running through your own veins when the music enters.
Wo. So deep and beautiful. I LOVE this.
blackvixen replied
thank you so mach for taking the tym to check out ma work shswan..m sooo glad you liked it