First break.

There’s a clear little road on this side of town
With black naked trees and untouched snow ground
With the side of the highway, as our background noise
A bruising layer backdrop yet to be turned

A Coat is not much for muscle, bone, skin
The ghost of our breathing hovers before us
We are the ever changing
Not weather
Not forests

Let time move the wind
A slow ebb of morning crawls up the horizon
Fire daubing the vanishing point
In color
In silence

Pushing the blood to our faces
We tremble from our interior coverings
Light has spread across this vista
But not through our skins


bjeliMis

First break. by

For the night is dark and full of Terrors.

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winter, cold, snow, black, forest

Comments

  • DeeLishess
    DeeLishess4 months ago

    hauntingly beautiful :)

  • Thanks you too!

    – bjeliMis

  • lilynoelle
    lilynoelle4 months ago

    Beautiful work.

  • Thanks you helped alot :)

    – bjeliMis

  • DeeLishess
    DeeLishess4 months ago

    aww, you think i’m hauntingly beautiful… lol jk i knew what you meant :)

  • alsounknownas
    alsounknownas4 months ago

    touching and brilliant

  • Thank you

    – bjeliMis

  • msdebbie
    msdebbie4 months ago

    I like the structure and visual imagery in this one xxx

  • thank you Debbie :)

    – bjeliMis

  • Jenifer DeBellis
    Jenifer DeBellis4 months ago


    Click on the banner to go straight to the permanent feature gallery.

    Congratulations,
    Anna, Sybille and Jenifer xox

  • Unexpected! Thanks you!

    – bjeliMis

  • msdebbie
    msdebbie4 months ago

    Well done on the feature x

  • Thanks Debbie xx

    – bjeliMis

  • CreativeKitty
    CreativeKitty4 months ago

    great work

  • Oh thanks so much!!

    – bjeliMis

  • Anna Shaw
    Anna Shawabout 1 month ago

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