Clear Days
I wrote this when I was 12 and I honestly did those things on that wonderful day!
I took a photo Looking Up
Clear Days belongs to the following groups:
"Exceptional Ekphrasis", 1620, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Live, Love, Dream, Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, Melbourne & Victoria, Up & Coming Writers and WMGI lay on the soft grass, my red hair spilled around me.
I look up to the almost clear blue sky with a couple of white cotton clouds floating lazily and merrily.
The whisper of the wind flowing through my ears as the trees gently swayed around me.
I was at piece.
My head was clear of thoughts.
My mind making funny shapes out of the clouds above.
I see a baby dragon blowing a puff of fire out of its mouth, then as the cloud began to move it changed to a chicken pecking a pile of something.
I lay there for hours watching the clouds and the sun pass by, I feel relaxed.
I feel happy and I have never had the feeling of this as if there were no worries in the world.
I listen to dogs bark happily to each other.
I hear horses neigh and gallop around their paddocks.
I here the call of the birds as I watch them glide by happily in the sky.
I hear the bounce of the trampoline of which my brother was jumping as high as his legs could take him.
I watched the day go by.
I sit to watch the sunset and the sky turned different colours, blue to a purple- pink colour, reminding me of the poem my mum used to say (red sky at night, sailors delight. Red sky in morning, sailors take warning).
I sit here as the cool air fills our place and the sent of mist is in the air.
I lie back down and watch the clear starry sky.
I spot the Southern Cross in the sky and knew that if I could see the Southern Cross then I would be home.
I see Orion’s Belt (the pot) and the bright shimmering moon.
I want to lie here forever. But I know that it’s getting late and I must go to bed. But I’ll be back tomorrow
indeterminacy
You wrote this when you were 12???? You have a clear and natural style that I think should be the envy of any writer. If you want to know what I was writing when I was 11 have a look here
You really made the summer come alive for me. It’s the little details, like the description of the trampoline, or quoting the poem your mother told you.
bjboo replied
thankyou indeterminacy, yes i enjoy writing alot but if you read the work of my sister (gynnirox) or my mother (adgray) then you will understand that our family is full of writers.
adgray
Wow Boo I haven’t even seen this before!
Yes my girl we are all a very talented bunch aren’t we! I wonder what’s in Danny’s mind! and if Tom would ever give himself 3 seconds to think of writing creatively I wonder what he’d come up with! and yes your brother Michael was / is also a writer!
and here I was thinking it was just me and Lauren! lol
well done my girl you have surprised me!
but I still love you first! ~ Mummmmieeeeee xoxoxox
bjboo replied
Thanx mum… I’m sure you haven’t seen alot of my peices… but keep watching this page and more will come! =0D
BJBoo
saleire
Stunning piece of work! I was there with you on that grass looking at the dragon in the sky and hearing the wonderful sounds around you….....such peace and calm…...you captured the complete picture of what it’s like to be happy and at peace…...perfect images of a wonderfully calm day…........well done….this is great work.
saleire
oops….....I just read what you wrote up there …....and wanted to say this…....the best writers always say…....write what you know about…and you just said it up there, you honestly did those things and that is why you write so beautifully about them….fantastic!
saleire
OH oh oh….....I forgot…....boys like a challenge…...so if you want them to write, maybe you could say…..I bet you couldn’t describe a sunny day or a feeling in say, 50 words…....and watch their minds tick over :o)
bjboo replied
Thank you Sal… your words are so wise to me… thankyou for the tips… i will be sure to keep them in mind
BJBoo
~ Ademac
This is great….......I have an image that would be perfect, well done keep up the good work.
gynnirox
WOW! SOMETHING THAT MADE YOU FELL AT PEACE!
GIVE THE THING A MILLION DOLLARS!!!!!
lol, only joking… we do have a family of writers… even though dad can’t write a story to save himself…must only be maternity side… luvya 1st and 4eva… lozza <=:0)!!!
bjboo replied
Thanx little sis… I’m sure there are alot of things that make me at pease… and your spelling/grammar is one of them… lol
Love you first… COZ YA DIDN”T KNOW ME WHEN I KNEW YOU… lol
BJBoo
adgray
Just read Lozza’s comment … ask your dad about the mystery he was writing in Doveton … always wanted to know how that one worked out!
& No I haven’t seen much of your work so B R I N G . I T . O N !!!!! .... :o)
Chookas
Yes I can see the sky, the clarity of your peace!
☼ BRAVO! ☼
Isa Rodriguez
I am so in love with this. it is clear, it is soothing and rythmycal.. it has life .. wow.. I really like it !.. and you wrote it at 12 years????? i love how you describe the sounds around you . and the fact that you are without worries, but you must end it for the time being , at the end. :).. and then there will me more..
gynnirox
you know, regarding the reply you gave me…..
PEACE ISN’T SPELLED WITH AN S DINGBAT!