Colours of the Rainbow
I went to the park with my Family and saw a magnificent Rainbow and this went through my mind. There are other things that each are for but to create this poem I only needed them.
I got my step-dad Skik to take this shot of it for me
I dedicate this piece to My Family
but mostly My Mum
Colours of the Rainbow belongs to the following groups:
"Exceptional Ekphrasis", 1620, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Live, Love, Dream: , Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, Melbourne & Victoria, Up & Coming Writers and WMGRED is for Love
Love is for Friends
Friends is for Comfort
Comfort is ORANGE
ORANGE is for Laughter
Laughter is for Children
Children is for New
New is YELLOW
YELLOW is for Sweet
Sweet is for Flower
Flower is for Plant
Plant is GREEN
GREEN is for Peace
Peace is Calm
Calm is for Water
Water is BLUE
BLUE is Soft
Soft is for Pillows
Pillows is for Relax
Relax is VIOLET
VIOLET is for Gentle
Gentle is for Kind
Kind is for Tolerant
Tolerant is INDIGO
INDIGO is for Smooth
Smooth is for Even
Even is for Stable
Stable is RED
saleire
wonderful…...read something about the chakras and the colours therein and you will see that you were spot on :o)
adgray
Thank you my darling Becky Boo
This stunned me when I read it as you wrote it and it still stuns me now
Well done my girl!
love you first! xoxoxoxoxxoxoxoxxox
indeterminacy
This one’s another home run, right over the rainbow. Some people try to write so complexly, and really they are saying nothing. You say a lot by not trying to. It’s also a nice touch starting and ending with red.
Lovely.
Miri
just came through to your profile cos been reading your Mum’s stuff…this is a wonderful poem, & i agree with indeterminacy….simplest is best…you’ve got those colours nailed
Chookas
Brilliant treatise poem about rainbow colours
☼ BRAVO! ☼
Debbie Sanders...
Congrats on the feature Love the poem