Atonement

Evening birds settling dusk on the telephone wires
Vibrating air columns of a fundamental tone
The words flying, sharp as darts to a target
An arm thrown back, so swiftly the cards fall

Flying upwards first, then scattering and fluttering down
Meaningless now that they no longer bare meaning
This is the first harmonic breach of letting go

We will not find water in rain-tanks leaking
There will no longer be
Beautiful trails left for future moments
We will not play games
Against the world or make up our own language-

This is the stop sign
The dead end street

The soft satin ribbons of the unforgiven
The wall of blame that inevitably is built
The mournful notes of a singular silence
As it is and has always been
Lost in translation.


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“To bread I do not ask to teach me
but only not to lack during every day of life.
I don’t know anything about light, from where
it comes nor where it goes,
I only want the light to light up,
I do not ask to the night
explanations,
I wait for it and it envelops me,
And so you, bread and light
And shadow are”

Pablo Neruda

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  • Ushna Sardar
    Ushna Sardar8 months ago

    Great write!

  • thank you so much, this was painful to write, but most meaningful things in life are, thank you for the support

    – BiographyofRed8

  • Lisa  Jewell
    Lisa Jewell8 months ago

    Red,
    you write with such soul
    I am listening to Antony and the Johnstons and your ink is moving in synch with their sound….I’m not sure I’ll make any sense. This experience is rare so I thank you xx

  • Omg, I listen to Antony and the Johnstons all the time, especially when I am writing!! o,O thank you so much for the continued support, it means the world coming from such a writer I admire

    – BiographyofRed8

  • uncleblack
    uncleblack8 months ago

    this is really nice. gentle and deep.

  • Rocky Loder
    Rocky Loder8 months ago

    great write…

  • Tycatz
    Tycatz8 months ago

    Always loved your work. Very sad and beautiful, well done.

  • SimplyRed
    SimplyRed8 months ago

    :

  • thank you so much!!!

    – BiographyofRed8

  • Jenifer DeBellis
    Jenifer DeBellis8 months ago

    My sentiments exactly. All are casualty in this war of words. I feel the energy as it accelerates, hitting that last note and picking up momentum at the same time the pressure increases. Bittersweet read, xox

  • francis  carter
    francis carter6 months ago

    This is a great read mate! pleasure to read your work so Mysterious and evocative!