From Neptune to Portland
From Neptune to Portland belongs to the following groups:
All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Core [C.O.R.E], Everyday Life, Graphic Scratch and The Word TreeI feel it coming on like a storm brewing
The coldness knocks on my back bone
Outside the window light
Reflects through the half blinds
I open the fridge and drop everything
I open my eyes
To the storm as it swirls
And the feeble creature inside
Stumbles,
Blind as a worm
I feel it coming on like a storm
Brewing beneath my skin
The coldness spreads first through my bones
Then knocking
Knocking
Rattling the bars around my heart
The undertow
Comes and takes me
Away
Reflection
Regret
Freedom
Flight
Soul
Depth
Anger
From Neptune to Portland
JenniferB
You have a way of creating powerful imagery with your words, fantastic writing.
BiographyofRed8 replied
thank you.. this just came out in a fury..
PJ Ryan
so much strength in this .. that last line really seals an amazing piece.
BiographyofRed8 replied
thank you
butchart
the coldness knocks on my backbone
brilliant line…... you had me from then on…..... your intuitive analysis of emotion is wonderful… i can see how this just “spilled out” from you….... much like how i write…... bravo red…......b
BiographyofRed8 replied
thank you kind sir, well I have so much inspiration and support around me.. plus sometimes spillages are a good thing indeed!!
Erika .
WOw..Red this is amazing. Such vivid imagery, it flows so beautifully. :)
BiographyofRed8 replied
thank you!
ShadowDancer
so much emotion in this.. it left me feeling a little weak, as if i had given birth to these words myself. you always take me on a journey, red.
Shoaib .
thats quite a journey
good work