With clouds boiling fiercely in soft cloaks of grey,
and the light of the gods in the sky-
I bared my soul to the force of the night,
and wished the past year goodbye.
A turbulent year, reflected by storm ,
with power, excitement and pain.
With coolness refreshing, like breezes in summer.
With tears like the sweet fall of rain.
The winds carrying scents of some interesting place,
bring sand grains to prickle the skin of my face.
So has the year gone. The exquisite pleasure,
shining like lightning; a transient treasure,
now lost in the grey cloak’ed clouds.
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Comments
This is very beautiful, very well written.
Thank you so much..my first piece here :)
– binjy
Wonderfully done.!!!!!!!!!!!!
:) appreciated..thank you.
– binjy
That is lovely, keep up the good work!
:)) thanks.
– binjy
Really wonderful love the imagery :)
Stacey, thank you :)
– binjy
you are right my friend…. in many ways we think alike……. these are beautiful words….. a reflection of my thoughts…….. wonderful opening lines…. tthey carry us through the beauty of this work…………b
you have done it again, you have captured the magic of how words can tell our feelings within ourself and with nature. Well done