Four Leaf Clover
Ever had such a beautifully vivid daydream, that seems to go on forever and ever..
Four Leaf Clover belongs to the following groups:
WMGBlades of grass and a hopeful breeze
Send waves across this valley
Dandelion dreams, such scattered yellow gleams
Once, twice too many
Whisper a tune of such delight
Spreading morning light to a world of grace
Not a trace of darkness left to find
Run far and leave it far behind
And what a pretty picture
We paint with words so green, blue, yellow, true
This spoken word’s a tiny bird that skims across the ocean scene,
The ocean green
That shimmers in the hopeful breeze
This tiny moment..stretched as far as you can see
One second. Not a minute?
A minute. Maybe ten?
Tumble over four leaf clover
Time to start again
Solar Zorra
Beautiful image, very uplifting.
Ben Ruskin replied
thank you Janine, I’m so glad you liked it! :)
sally-ann rawl...
beautiful,,,it paints a story in my head,,,theres not many poems that can do that for me
well done
xx
Ben Ruskin replied
wow..what a big compliment that is then! thankyou sally-ann, i really appreciate that
Rachael Hope
It seems I only scratched the surface of your talent, when I read your other poems. Your writing is such a pleasure to read. I think I’d describe it as big crashing waves of metaphor that just draw you in.
Lys •
i can see everything…
im a huge fan of colours and description, and youve got it spot on :)
i could feel hopeful breeze
i could see the tiny bird skimming the ocean…