I find myself constantly surrounded
By cardboard boxes filled with dust
And the useless little items that life collects
I couldn’t stand to waste them
There’s an escape within reach
But the key cant fit through the debris
So I’ll sit by myself in a hallway
All these doors seem to lead to nowhere
I wanted adventure
I wanted the perfect mix of life and easy living
Without the repercussions, without thinking
I wanted the easy way, the fast lane
The wrong way, to go about it
But tell me I’m a good person, won’t you
Right my wrongs with words of praise
I’ll pay you back with a bunch of flowers picked by
Men I don’t know and paid for in coin to a
Lovely old lady behind the counter
And when the formalities are over we could
Make some noise for the neighbours
So give me a bright light, my bulb’s gone out
And I’m scared
Of the skeleton that currently resides in my closet
A source of unease, but not much else
And I’m owed about three months rent
And it’s these thoughts
They float piecemeal and stranded through the highways of my mind
With a speed limit that no one tries to understand
It might as well be a runway
As my fancies take flight and glide above me
Higher than I ever thought they could reach
But still within my grasp
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A beautifully poetic description of the highs and lows of the human condition, with an excellent use of metaphor and imagery, never overdone. (I have the impression that this writing began at approximately 4 a.m.)
haha it sure did! 4am is a very good guess! and thanks so much :) im glad you enjoyed it! i do enjoy a good rant every now and again.. :)
– Ben Ruskin
This is so great..What a wonderful write and I love the close ‘As my fancies take flight and glide above me
Higher than I ever thought they could reach
But still within my grasp’
Really perfect how you word your place at the moment. Very real rantings in a poetic way. Love it