Ensnared

Ben Ruskin
Author: Ben Ruskin
Word Count: 87
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Ensnared

Ensnared belongs to the following groups:

***♂♥♥QUORN♥♥♀, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical and WMG

She caught my eye a few days ago
Stood there on the balcony
With the wind making patterns from her long golden hair
Eyes that pierced through me seemed to smile in my direction
Sending stray ripples of curiosity through my usually impassive demeanor
She reeled me in with an invisible line
And a smile that wouldn’t take no for an answer
“Hello, what’s you name?”
I asked her
“Hi, I’m Temptation. Nice to meet you”
“I’m Tempted, nice to meet you too”

  • nancyames

    nancyames

    Very effective, a charming and descriptively poetic story about your “usually impassive demeanor”.

  • silvercircles

    silvercircles

    I LOVE those last lines:
    “Hi, I’m Temptation. Nice to meet you”
    “I’m Tempted, nice to meet you too”

  • Ben Ruskin replied

    hehe aw, thanks :) i’m really glad you enjoyed it

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poem and temptation