the morning has gold in its mouth

Author: bellmusker
Word Count: 168
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the morning has gold in its mouth

It’s not easy having a wrist fetish when you’re half awake and just want your morning coffee…..if men only knew what the sight of their wrists can do to a woman.

Well, this woman.

Inspired by a conversation at a Melbourne Writers’ Meeting.

the morning has gold in its mouth belongs to the following groups:

Blue Room, The Red Writing Room, The Sensual Word and WMG

A slender swell of flesh under honey hued skin. I exhaled so slowly it sounded like a moan. The cinnamon danced in the early morning sunlight and drifted onto his upturned hand, looking like a dusting of gentle freckles. I caught my tongue between my teeth to subdue the urge to slowly slide it across his palm, and lick them off.

The curve of flesh at the base of his thumb ran in a seductive arc to the delicate bones of his wrist, and I needed to see his ink-black hairs laid against my skin. Watching his hands dance amongst the steam of the machine bewitched me more than a hundred flirtations ever could, and I wanted them in places I shouldn’t even be thinking about this early in the morning.

I have no idea about the rest of him. When he handed me my coffee, wound those mesmerising fingers around the silver coins, I never thought to look up.

I didn’t need to.

clone42

I think I know that guy…
bellmusker

Haha, can you send him around to my place?
KEITH R. WILL...

that’s a great description of a cashier
LittleHelen

Oh dear me…..just gorgeous :)
Lisa Jewell

I’m very partial to the wrist….

I must not read this again while at work
I must not read this again while at work
I must not read this again while at work
I must not read this again while at work
I must not read this again while at work
bellmusker replied

Come on, you know you want to…..

I’m so pleased you share my desire – now we can wrist-gaze next time we’re out together! Oh, wait…that could get dangerous…..;-)
Jessica Tremp

that is hilarious…i wrote this just a month ago:
;I love my morning walks to work. A piece of calm before the storm.
Dayvan Cowboy by Boards of Canada moves me along whimsically this morning, lullabying through my broken ipod earpiece. A stomach and mind of yesterdays wine urges me on, begging for a roasted brown beaned release. Here’s my stop. The aromatic smell demands it so. Sitting at the bar, waiting for my soy latte to be poured by able hands…hands, hands…i’m stuck on the hands. Gaze moves up, my coffee boy. Yumm!! Morning treat supreme. Please take your time with the coffee…oh o.k., have a nice day!
I know I’ll be back tomorrow.

velvety kisses’
bellmusker replied

Jess, I love what you wrote! And I thought it was just me…..now I wonder how many women harbour intense desire for the beauty of a man’s hands. I really don’t think men are aware of this…how we watch intently, imagining just what those hands could do when laid upon our bodies…...

But at least your gaze moved up!
Lisa Jewell

Dangerous Liaisons ;)
burntblue

excellent stuff! lovely imagery
SuliHawk

Oh so very nice!! The imagry of the cinnamon sifting down and the urge to lick it off. Wow!
A mans hands, so strong with the ability to give us the pleasure we desire…
even if it is just a cup of coffee. LOL
flower68

I like to touch the hands,as though I’m blind(obviously not practical concerning strangers!!)but I like to look at the mouth and that V.The V is probably my favourite zone.Shame it’s mostly covered :-l..I love this piece of writing.Beautifully descriptive and engrossing.
bellmusker replied

Thank you – it’s my fetish that’s engrossing, rather than my words! And god knows I spend so much time wrist-gazing, I’m glad I can describe them…...but thank you, I appreciate your comments.
friartuck

I’m sitting here now, at work, turning my hand around, watching the muscles and tendons move and thinking “Really? This old thing?”
Strong, fanciful and delightful imagery there ‘Musker. Like it ;-)
bellmusker replied

Thank you kindly! Though you really should be careful what you say, as anything can trigger these thoughts. Like the image of you flexing your wrists….muscles and tendons…....sigh…....
friartuck

Hee hee – if I make it to the writer’s meet-up on the weekend I’ll wear long sleeves and thick gloves just to spare you the agony.
Actually. I lie. I probably won’t… ;-)
Hope I can make it though!
Laurie McClave

Wow Wrists! me too! that’s really weird! at least I thought it was, wow you learn something new every day. And that I can be excited by some one else writing about it ! oooohhhhh ;o too bad you all live in Australia, my hubby has real nice wrists!
Marny Barnes

I am partial to big hands my self. the strong …look like they could pick me up in the wink of an eye kinda hands…I love this peice to…helen has great taste!
bellmusker replied

Lord yes, it’s that thought, isn’t it – imagining what they could do to you. Makes me shiver every time. And I’ll raise a whiskey to the wonderful Helen for featuring this!
Alison Gainge

I liked this .. I could picture it in details :) .. I’ll have to pay closer attention to a mans wrist next time I get the opportunity
blackirish

That is one hot vignette there. I could see a sly smile on your face with the last sentence. Good stuff. :)
bellmusker replied

You should see the smile on my face as I wait for my coffee….such a delicious way to wake up in the morning! But you know, for the life of me, I can’t recall his face ;)

Thanks for your comments, I’m enjoying your thoughts on my writing immensely.
Holly Ringland

It makes me smile to think that the owner of your objects of affection had absolutely idea of your salivations… What delicious descriptions of morning magic and cinnamon. Bewitching ;)
bellmusker replied

Ah, thank you! I think the fact that I tend to direct my comments to his hands might tell him something, but I doubt men think that way. Bless them, I often take in the wrists of my friends and colleagues without getting caught, hehehe. If only they knew…wait, they do now! Damn…...
markgb

Wrists huh? The curvature of a womans foot and long slender toes get ME everytime! : )
bellmusker replied

Aha, you’re one of those! :-) We can’t explain what makes us shiver; I just know that watching a man bend his wrist absolutely hypnotises me, and brings all sorts of images to my mind. But feet, hey? Very interesting…...
eon .

Hey Miss Bellmusker….I have to say…You have the most tantalizing ability to create atmos with your words. What a gift Indeedy ( ’ – ))
Ciao Bella
bellmusker replied

Thank you kindly…...this piece has made many of my friends look at men’s wrists with closer focus. And really, that can’t be a bad thing!
PS Especially if there’s a smattering of dark hair or, even better, grey. Sigh…..
markgb

What about when the man is playing the drums and his wrists are flailing every-which-way?
(I must apologize, there are a few of your writtings on my watchlist page that I haven’t had a chance to read yet, ~~been slackin a bit on that~~ but I haven’t forgot about them)
stupidland

hahaha. that sounds ripe!!!!
bellmusker replied

Sigh…..wrists bring me completely undone in seconds…..and the beauty of this particular fetish is that I can indulge every single day without being noticed…and I do, believe me…I surely do ;-)
stupidland

wrists are amazing! wrists and the nape of the neck!
Shswan

Bell, this is so beautiful. So true about men’s wrists. I can watch my husband’s hands for hours. (Long road trips are never boring; I watch the driver more than the scenery.)

Do you have a book? Will you have one soon?
bellmusker replied

Ah, this is perhaps why several of my men have been musicians….when I watch their wrists bend over the guitar or drumsticks, strange things happen to me ;-) Glad you understand!

Thanks so much for asking about a book. 2008 was a damn fine year for me, with several short stories accepted for publication, but as for a whole book….. let’s see what I can carve for myself in 2009, hey? Thanks again!
CloudChaser

hands…utterly fascinating…...i like them big and strong…never really had a hang up about wrists though….maybe i should study them a bit more!!
bellmusker replied

Oh I highly recommend it…...highly ;-)
erika15

WOW!! I thought I was the only one that was attracted to a man’s hands. I love to see them move.
I can so relate to this. I love hands! haha! that’s sounds funny…..but hands are very special indeed. They express a lot.
bellmusker replied

They are special, I agree. Just last night I became so entranced with the wrists of a fellow passenger on the tram that I forgot to get off and missed my stop completely! Immensely seductive :-)
Duncan Waldron

Wrists, eh? Fascinating. I have a special fondness for widow’s peaks (my wife’s, at least), French braids … and the smell of knees (but perhaps I’m being too personal now!).
Anyway, love this piece. Short & sweet and oh-so-expressive.
bellmusker replied

Widows peaks, French braids and the smell of knees
Well, well, well…..I see you understand exactly what I’m talking about! It’s that catch of breath, that double thump of the heart, and that need to reach out and stroke it…..now I’m curious about the knees. Might have to check that out, and get back to you!
Kristin Reynolds

Oh, boy. now you have me dreaming of the wrist I want to suck, but cannot because he’s 5zillion miles away…my god, a man’s hands, wrists and..well..let’s not go there right now…are so freaking sexy. you are an amazing amazing writer, my dear. right on. high-five on the wrist-lust. ;) K
bellmusker replied

My wrist fetish is astoundingly strong….my colleagues know to wear long sleeves, or I can’t get any work done :-) Nothing in the world like it…....thanks!
JasmineLove

OMG!!!!! Sensuous…sexy…awesome!!!!! Jasmine xo
bellmusker replied

Thanks Jasmine! Now you’ve got me looking around the room, silently checking out all those muscles and tendons…sigh
TheWanderingBoo 25 days ago

incredibly beautiful and sensuous writing (as always :¬))
bellmusker replied 25 days ago

Thank you, dear Boo! This is an older piece but sometimes I flick it to the top of my folio. I’m glad that it caught your attention :-)
mistertrooth 18 days ago

damn, now i want to learn to make coffee … I’ll add it to the ‘to do’ list…
bellmusker replied 18 days ago

When you do, come back and let me know :-)