Tales of the GGB #1
Dirty laughter turning heads
I heard them before I saw them
Mischief darting between their heels
And rubbing his hands
I knew the game was on
Rich musk on warm skin
raindrops clinging to their cheeks
I wanted to slide my tongue along their curves
Instead of saying hello
I wasn’t the only one.
A third of a coven at an outside table
Licking the rain from our wine glasses
the cumin from the olives
with a flick of our forked tongues
Moonlight spilling onto the table
And the luminous beauty
of my jezebels at play
With red notebooks and white wine
and laughter so filthy
that even Mischief
stopped
and stared
© bellmusker 2007
Comments
Bell…any time my love x x thank you
hmmm was I there? This sounds not only voyeuristically sensual but in presence delicious….;)
Oh you were definitely casting spells that night, my girl…..don’t ever doubt it.
bellmusker, this is beautiful,,,,evocative, sensual and beautiful use of imagery. I can almost taste those olives….gorgeous x
Oh oh oh…GGB’s rock my universe. This has to now be my very fav piece of writing on RB and we all know why. Love you Bellmusker, you delectable wench :p See, that word really is working for me now thanks to you! :)))
Kristygirl, I knew you were a wench the moment I laid eyes on you all those months ago in Big Mouth….you are just ripe with wench-hood! So glad I’m helping you reclaim the word, for its absolutely delicious.
And the GGB’s rock my world too…..I need them more than ever this week. X X X
Excellent work, very tightly woven, good word choices and imagery-love the tactile earthiness
Great writing. I love your imagery it’s like the light in great photographs it’s everything, and you do it well.
Thank you! I wanted to do justice to the amazing women whose joy, earthiness and sheer life force help me keep my head up high… I’m pleased you like it.
Amazing, talented, beautiful, saucy as fuck women.
So nice to come back and reread this. Back to where it allll began :)