brown sugar trick

OH my this is so sexy…....and so true.

xx

i love it bell

“squeeze my lemons, baby, till the juice runs down my leg…”

(gotta adore Robert Plant for that line)
(but not as much as I adore this and you)

xox

We can but try…...........

This is a wonderful wonderful poem…. love the image of a pomegranate and a lemon…. pucker up:))

I wonder if you were listening to the song when you wrote this? It is probably one of the best stones songs ever. (apart from angie) love the ending and the metaphors, excellent writing

I was trying to think of something clever to say, but failed. So instead I will say that lemon and sugar make lemonade and lemonade is delicious…

done! =D

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5FDBBzp7bdg&feature=related

ME?? I just love this stanza…
I think of pomegranates
where burnished skin
hides the bruise
at my core
made my night all the much sweeter, your use of words seems so real.. like everyone says that!

ohhh, love this bell .. you’ve really summised a personality so well here, love the descriptions, you’re the sweetest lemon i’ve ever known hahahaha big hugs, see you 2moro x

sensuously sexy, beautiful piece of writing

sweet and sour the chinese always sunderstood the combination
but i think your`e talking about something different
and to quote the stones
wild wild horses couldn`t drag me away
just joking belle
a great verse by yourself again
there`s always depth to your writting

I LOVE LEMONS, I EAT THEM WHOLE, PEEL AND ALL hehe
tequila though, way too many bad past episodes, i can’t go near the stuff, even the smell scares the bejesus out of me. LOL ;) xox
lemons are so sweeeet, nice one bell. ;) xox

You’re a peach
...which has a hard stone in the middle, inside of which is a bitter almond taste – slightly nutty…?
Or just a little tart ;-)

No wonder RN has selected your work – such feeling in so few words.

terrific, as always, bell!

Fabulous! Love it!

Bellissimo!
I prefer the salt trick.. and lemons go so well with mezcal :)

Love it! xoxox

hehehe, that warms my heart so. thanks for letting me know. ;) xox
ps. the peel is my favourite part, yummy. hehe have fun ;) xox

btw, you gotta know i love your hardcore description of me. love it hehe

love this!

yep, I like it too!

brown sugar is so much better for you…X A pleasure it is to read your verses Bell

Just love your writing :)))

i don’t know what it is that i love about this piece more: the imagery of thick brown sugar crystals mushed between the bruisy dark flesh of pomegranates, or the calling of persephone from her goddess seat below, or the rejuvenation of citrus scents which reminds me of the lemon tree in the garden of a house on your street that i considered plucking wares from like i collected my little bouquets of lavender… or maybe it’s that on the day you wrote this you came home and told me about it, your eyes glittering with the joy of words falling from your fingertips amongst your breadwinning baking duties… whatever it is beautiful woman, i savour and relish every single one of these 71 little words so much.