the kohl girl & her lime pips

Bell…This is just gorgeous!
oh and hey especially the bit about the loving the name; Liesl! HOw can you not!

OMFG…I can see that Robert Palmer clip as clear as day…

This is simply irresistable…and had me cracking up!

nite Bella x

fuck….this is really unbelievably good…..have to fave. ...what a writer…sheesh!!

You would love to be here with me now Bell. I’m sure you, like me, love it when people look or stare at you wierdly as you cackle seemingly at nothing…whilst typing or writing furiously! I am chortling to myself whilst reading and the British, lovely demure little race that they are… always peer curiously at you from the corner of their eye and try despirately not to show that they think you’re completely insane! Pure pleasure!

This makes my face ache from smiling…..I’d just LOVE to meet this woman!!!

I liken your writing to a modern day Scott Fitzgerald…..this is exceptional. I felt like I was sitting across from these two. This woman had us on leash with her tongue! This is a keeper :))))

Manscara!

I missed a lot of those lessons as well…..that, or I had my own perspective on flirting and putting on make-up.

Anyway.
I love this!!

Big kiss.

Finding this at 5am makes getting up to go to work not so bad after all! You are extraordinary Bell… I shall reread and reread and reread…
May the lunar cycle move extra quickly this month to perhaps encourage another appearance by the delightful kohl girl…

appetite for destruction was the first tape I ever bought, when i was 10…i still listen to it today…

i know a girl – no, girls – just like her…and i love them for it

The wait was more than worth it…..

I drank this in as I always do with your writing….you set the scene so well.

I too love the word Sassafras….the way it feels tickling off my tongue, not to mention as a kid we’d say SassssssyaFrasss (in other words shutup)…

I’m a Virgo, I might need to be caution ;)

This is great! Really great imagination and description. LOVE the random stuff! Well done!

Such a well-written piece. As a man, I’d be hideously intimidated at first, but I’d fall instantly in love with any girl who could say “I’m allergic to purple and terrifying to Virgos” Hahahahahaha!!! Brilliant 8)

Ha. I love this. There’s something about lists of random wackjob stuff that I can’t resist. Difficult to pick a favourite, but yeah, the Reflex would be hard to recite. If i was her, I’d steer clear of this nubbins – he doesn’t want enough. Yes, the heat does indeed do strange things. Ax

wow Bell, wow! i’m speechless….

Executed with feline grace; an early morning stretch that starts on the front paws and ends with a shake of the tail.

I love the whisky-warmness; the wood-aged mellowedness of it. There’s a slow sashay of the hips and a finger that beckons – once. And then – dare or be damned.

Early Gunners, naturally. Nobody talks about the later albums. Sassy scene setting at its grandest.

so gorgeous Bell. your little tidbits in this are a feast for kings and queens…
pisceans…bless them

i thought it was good after the first reading. after a second i think it’s excellent. tantalizing text…makes you yearn for such a conversation.

giggle

brilliant xx

Well, coming from this Pure PIscean I believe there is nothing more full of ruby red claret than a list of about me’s and what I likes that fly over the heads of manscara cowboys in dizzying brilliant madness. One of my favorite words since I was a child was “Sasparilla.” This word was always beautiful to me especially when drawn out like a lazy southern drawl. Sasparilla.

Bell…what can I say…if this is any indication of the amazing fucking shit you write when you’re feeling…er, frisky. Then girl – get you’re frisk on!

_{however, the color purple, especially if dark, turns me into a wanton thing, hmm but beyond that…}

Oohh, what a summer I have to look forward to – suddenly it seems much more bearable if I can read beauties like this!

Wow, this is great! It made me smile, too.

Another wonderful little journey you took me (everyone) on here Bell… man, you know how to set a scene and inhabit the voice of some damn interesting characters with your words.

Can’t you go and get writers block or something so I can spend more time with brushes and turps?
You’re becoming an addiction my friend.. look what you are doing to all these poor hapless people hanging on your every word.

On second thoughts, stuff the cold turkey (make that duck).. post another one!!!

I guess I should clarify my comment…..I related to how in The Great Gatsby he was able to very quickly get the reader inside the skin of his characters…..like Daisy. Reading your work it was the same for me….....in a very short while I knew so much about these two people. :)

I love how her fear of seeming approachable is such a thin mask for the even greater fear of the joy of letting it all spill forth. Each detail was a scrumptious little delight, some so recognisable, some delightfully twisted on their ear. I loved being a fly on her frisky wall indeed. x

Bell!
It’s brilliant… and (not so strangely) resinates with me a little too much! lol

It sounded like you were having a lot of fun there Bell. You must get sick of constantly producing such pearlers, eh? ;-)
Planning on getting to the next writer’s meet. Any themes I need to be aware of…?

ah bell your words really do fill many pages of redbubble just wonderfully, i like this girl i think, haha i purr when im sleepy or lusting.
love the quick thinking cowboy too.

although the mascara is a worry, the gay guys get all the good ones sometimes it seems…that said i do ballet and wear skinny jeans and im straight as a beam.

great work bell i have only one thing to say:
more, more, more!

i think this is my fav Belle….
see u thurs… if i get over my shockin case of the sniffles….
i like boys with floppy quiffs, holes in their socks and pointy whoes that lace on the side…
i like sassy girls who look all dark and broody and flick their hair when they get caught up in their own reflection, that jump on their beds and sing patti smith on the top of their lungs and that let everybody know just how much they are suffering when they are bleeding :)

typo: third line ‘pointy shoes’ :)

oh wait… i just realised i am in love with myself…. hahahaha

Hilarious! :) Had me cackling like a regular witch! ;)

Mx

wow. That was super funny. Write more, Write more. :)

Mine too! well, at least now they do. =]

i adore this its just fantastic, i think its the best thing i have read on this site yet. thank you :)

oh oh and oh! and even more ohs! blew me away so many good lines so many laughs and little recognitions – i love the way you write

Well, I read this through silently , then decided to read it aloud. and I LOVED it each time.She had me just as soon as she uttered , “I like hares”. That and the fact that she likes the sound of my name. How sweet it is. Ha;)))
Peace,
Sassafras

I adore your writing style!!!
I’ll be back for more soon!!!

love this, especially when she tells what she likes. sneezing- i thought i was the only one who enjoyed that. :)

brilliant! and such fun – and there in all that fun, some lines like girls who ‘chose their own nicknames’- – poignancy at its best. Another fav from me., Have you written a book so I can have all these to clutch in my hand and dream on my bedside table?

pure awesomeness

i wish i met a girl who said that.. hahaha, also i am totally up for snorting!! (only the laughing type of course) this is brilliantly and wittily written

Words cannot express just how much I enjoyed this. Delightful. Punchy. Involving. brilliant. Loved it so very very VERY much. WOW.

I had to re read this three times today. Had to. Felt compelled to. Thought you should know that :)

Am speechless with this piece. The way you write is so intoxicating….I feel in a haze after reading this piece…. wish I drank wiskey – would be pouring myself one right now!

My goodness, wouldn’t I love to have an answer like that to such a cliche question. Amazing! This almost reads as a monologue for drama, it would work that way. Thanks for sharing it with this small area of the world, you have left us all in awe of what you can create with your words.

utterly spellbinding. of course you know you left us wanting more!
shheeesh woman you can WRITE : )

Hee Hee!! Reminds me of nights on the town.

Bell this has got to be the first page of something bigger ! Loved it. By the way, logged on to redbubble today because a “sinister little fucker” appeared beside me in the park and I now couldn’t agree with you more! This one had carbon stilts that made him bounce. I was itchin to stick out a foot and take him down for the Bellmuster!
Anyways, the only disappointment in reading your work is getting to the end. Love it Love it Love it!

Being this is the first piece of yours that I have finally gotten my sloth self to consume I must say, I didn’t even realise myself, until reading about the cowboys rising grin, that a very curious and indulgent smile had spread itself far and wide across my cheeks :)
Much to the amusement of my fellow office slobs, I even managed an instinctive snort at the end of the piece.
Incredibly enjoyable work my dear :)

and most evenings I collect stray hairs and plait them into beak warmers for ducks. ..HAHAHA! Oh this is my favorite line! I’ve never heard anything like this before! :D
god, I love her! She’s so unique!

I like…the use of the word delectable....For some reason this reminds me of you ;)

You are genus to paint these characters with such offbeat charisma.. This story just drifts around you like a fog creeping up from the underworld-until your completely captivated by all the idiosyncrasies that weave together. What strikes me most is how much it comes at you in this manner, at so many levels.

Love this…. so alive and draws you right in. Of course it helps that I love characters that stray off the beaten path – real and fictional! Excellent writing, glad to have stumbled upon it.

nice…....really very nice