Living Dead Girl

Rhana Griffin
Author: Rhana Griffin
Word Count: 106
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Come hold me here
now in the dark.
Warm this corpse
that is my living heart.

For though it beats
it cannot feel
slashed with word wounds
too deep to heal.

I’ve tried so hard
to seal them shut
but the blood it still seeps
through these stitches of catgut.

Please don’t turn away
from the ugliness you see,
look past the torn flesh
into the real me.

I hear funeral bells tolling
they think its too late
to save this poor wretch
from its terrible fate.

Quickly! Make haste now!
let your love be the start,
to the resurrection of my
corpse of a heart.

Living Dead Girl

We have all wandered through our dark places hoping to find someone who could reignite our candle and chase away the shadows.

We reveal much of ourselves through our art and our words, and so it must be said that this poem comes not from this time – a time where I am happy and loved – but a time from long ago.

  • billyboy

    billyboy, 5 months ago

    Your poetry floats my boat, so I am installing my coffin permanently next to yours. Catgut. Mmmmmmmmmm

  • Alan Findlater

    Alan Findlater, 5 months ago

    I am gald you found the think or person who returned that feeling to you

  • Alan Findlater

    Alan Findlater, 5 months ago

    sorry i think i meant glad!!

  • billyboy

    billyboy, 5 months ago

    I am actually more of a think than a person. And Alan, she didn`t actually find me… she`s known me since the beginning of time. Cool that you regognize soul bonding…

  • Rhana Griffin

    Rhana Griffin in reply to billyboy’s comment, 5 months ago

    reply to comment 1
    BB… Plenty of room in my cellar for your coffin. Just bring your own dirt and dont step on the teddies.

    reply to comment 2
    BB… (laughs) I have no response to that… except to maybe direct you here {{hugs}}

  • Rhana Griffin

    Rhana Griffin in reply to Alan Findlater’s comment, 5 months ago

    reply to comment 1
    Alan… you have no idea how happy I am that I found my “thinks” and my “persons” I’m scared of the dark… I need the light.

    reply to comment 2
    Alan… I see you too, suffer from dyslexic fingers ;)

  • Roy barry

    Roy barry, 5 months ago

    Rhana, so glad you escaped the dark place, what a soulful written work.

  • clarkey

    clarkey, 5 months ago

    Beautifully written resurrection, Rhana. Glad you found the one to start your heart again and return feeling to it.

  • LocoCow

    LocoCow, 5 months ago

    Isn’t that how we all percieve ourself ugly and disfigured by our losses in thepast… Wishing we could turn into a cacconed inch worm waiting to transgress…

  • photos40

    photos40, 5 months ago

    LOVELY PIECE OF WORK. TIM BURTON -ISH IN IT MORBIDITY YET WARMING & LOVING AT THE END. BRAVO ON YET ANOTHER MASTERPIECE.!!!!!

  • demon

    demon, 5 months ago

    Very dark work from a bubbly Bella…Hugggs xox

  • Joyce Dickens, IPA

    Joyce Dickens,..., 5 months ago

    Beautifuly written and moving!

  • LisaG

    LisaG, 5 months ago

    Dearest Bellababe,

    I’m so happy that you are now in a place of feeling your heart full, embraced and alive….

    XOXOXOX

  • Kristy Lee

    Kristy Lee, 5 months ago

    Yes…we have all been in those dark places where we are just begging for someone to light the way.
    And how lucky are we now my dear friend, to know that if we do ever wander back into that cave of darkness, that we have each other to reach out and cling onto :)
    Love you immensely.

  • Rhana Griffin

    Rhana Griffin in reply to Kristy Lee’s comment, 5 months ago

    Kristy hunny… the word lucky doesnt even begin to describe how it feels to have you in my life. Love you so damn much!

  • Rhana Griffin

    Rhana Griffin in reply to Roy barry’s comment, 5 months ago

    Roy this wasnt so much written as wrenched from the deepest darkest depths of my soul. Thankyou.

  • Rhana Griffin

    Rhana Griffin in reply to clarkey’s comment, 5 months ago

    Clarkey, it wasnt so much a “one” but many “ones”. And each and every one of them brought a something different from their emotional medicine cabinets that they instinctively knew I needed to help me heal.

  • Rhana Griffin

    Rhana Griffin in reply to LocoCow’s comment, 5 months ago

    Loco, yes we do perceive ourselves thus. But I know from personal experience that if you find the right people to hold that mirror up in front of you they can show you just how beautiful you really are.

  • Rhana Griffin

    Rhana Griffin in reply to photos40’s comment, 5 months ago

    photos40 how wonderful that you got that morbity in this piece… its what I set out to achieve so thankyou!

  • Rhana Griffin

    Rhana Griffin in reply to demon’s comment, 5 months ago

    Demon… thanks for the bandages {{hugs}}

  • Rhana Griffin

    Rhana Griffin in reply to LisaG’s comment, 5 months ago

    Lovely Lisa… thanks for the emotional aspirin and the kisses on my forehead for the “owwies” XXXXX

  • LocoCow

    LocoCow, 5 months ago

    The BUTTERFLY CONSPIRACY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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