SINCE HE WAS BORN

beatricereeves
Author: beatricereeves
Word Count: 276
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SINCE HE WAS BORN

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SINCE HE WAS BORN belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical and Prize Challenges!!

It was a lovely ;crisp.; fall morning.; the leaves were turning; as mother nature was busy creating her beautiful works of art on the earth..a little boy tommy walked on his way to school admiring this splendor. his thoughts were happy as he had show and tell that day .;on the way he met this man whom he kind of knew he talked to tommy all the time when he came that way ,;tommy thought him to be a nice man .that day the man seemed nervous and was looking at tommy as if he was trying to decide something which made tommy a little nervous,finally they came around the turn in the road .; the man waved to tommy and procedded to get into a truck that had been parked there. he again waved goodbye to the boy and left.tommy continued along his way to school getting more excited as he thought about what he was going to show .; his favorite bear that he had since he was born suddenly the truck pulled up to where tommy was walking and the man waved and stopped he said tommy if you get in we can get to school faster then you can get to do show and tell tommy thought of what his parents always warned him about noy talking to strangers or get into strange vechiles .; but i know this nice man thought tommy so he got into the vechile .. to this day tommy has not been found only the bear he had since he was born.tommy was six years old.; parents KNOW who your children talk to and go with them .

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    Excellent writing!!!!

  • barnsis

    barnsis

    To true, and to often.

  • beatricereeves

    beatricereeves

    thank you sally—-thank you B..

  • down23

    down23

    Sadly, this is definitely something needing to be said! Sent chills to my spine! Tommy shouldn’t have been by himself it’s too dangerous! That’s a very sad reality of the world we live in. I just can’t comprehend how anyone could ever intentionally hurt a child.

  • Sharon Mau

    Sharon Mau

    Oh!!!!!!!!! This makes me cry! I wasn’t prepared for such a tragedy!! It is around 0730 here on a Maui and while the west side of the island is bathed in warm early morning sunshine, a squall is blowing in on the North Shore. I am here to thank you for your kind note and now I have tears in my eyes as I am reminded of the precious innocent children in this world who are lost, some forever. My heart goes out to the children…...

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