Stuck in the Breach

beast
Author: beast
Word Count: 123
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Once more into the breach,
dear friends,
said a brave king to his men,
but many years have passed
and still no sign of them.

No end to the breach,
our backs to the wall,
fighting friend and foe;
so used to it now,
we allow ourselves to vow,
never once more to be conned by the show.

But what good is that if we never left,
with an arrow stuck in our side?
We write our wills,
and parade our wants,
but they are lost in all of these lies.

Such small petty things,
have sidetracked your minds,
who cares if their black or their white?
surely more important to know,
who’s behind the enthral,
and to stop them from evil intents.

Stuck in the Breach

not really sure about this one… might be too generalised. Still, i hope it acheives something to someone.

Stuck in the Breach belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, WMG and You're Accepted
  • nigelnash

    nigelnash, 6 months ago

    wow ! is ur spirit guide a knight or was that off the top of ur head bud?

  • beast

    beast in reply to nigelnash’s comment, 6 months ago

    lol, bit of both m8 :p thanks

  • KEITH  R. WILLIAMS

    KEITH R. WILL..., 6 months ago

    this is very nicely written

  • beast

    beast in reply to KEITH R. WILLIAMS’s comment, 6 months ago

    thankyou keith

  • Rachael  Hope

    Rachael Hope, 5 months ago

    Beautiful form to this, and sublime message! It’s not too generalised at all!! It’s great because the reader can apply it to their own experiences! I just loved this so much! You are a talent!!

  • beast

    beast in reply to Rachael Hope’s comment, 5 months ago

    thanks rachael, coming from your exquisite hand that means a lot, cant wait for your next peice :-)

  • butchart

    butchart, 5 months ago

    your spirit guide has done well by you…..... another extremely thought provoking piece of writing…... well done my friend….....b

  • beast

    beast in reply to butchart’s comment, 5 months ago

    thanks butch, glad it makes you think, i hope you dont mind me replying to all of you comments but they all offer something special. Thanks again my friend :-)

  • butchart

    butchart, 5 months ago

    i appreciate you taking the time friend.. i don’t mind at all…..b

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