This place of mine…That resides inside…
That I can climb….
Into…..Is more real than my waking life.
Whatever my deepest desires and darkest fears
Are manifested
Arrested.
I’m tested…Dream if you dare.
Each time to resolve unspoken issues…While I’m not aware.
What will be uncovered way down there?
I face the ego and the ego is I
The truth often intertwined in the lie.
And it seems it’s time…
to let it go.
Can’t be contend with what I already know,
But to become more intamate with my soul.
Is this real or just lucid dreaming?
Time to reveal…No time for scheming.
In this place where a things does not reveal it’s self.
But only to hide behind somthing else.
This place of visual trickery and emotional surrender
to reveal and discover what exist down under….
In the maze where I search and Blunder
This place I live in every night
This place I call my other life.
Every night I dream…And to me it seems…
Lys •
oh nice! this flows really well! im awful at making things rhyme…so i just try to avoid it, haha. the thing i love most about dreams is exactly what you said “no time for scheming.” take it as it comes. ive been practising that for a while now, and so far its been working swimmingly.
Be2ru
Thank you for the comment!….i’m glad you appriciate the flow…being a singer/songwriter…certianly helps…but its funny…somtimes i can’t STOP thinking in Ryme…lol…is that like a illness? or a conditioned mind?….
KEITH R. WILL...
thanks for being so real
Be2ru
Your welcome!…..*blush
sweetscent62
Wonderful Be2ru : ) I love it… (I was doing the rap in my head as I was reading : ) ) Wendy
Be2ru
LOL.! You’ve made me very happy, Sweetscents! I’m glad you could feel the rythem…and the flow! It sure is nice to be noticed!….and thank you! Keith Williams, for taking the time to read it. I will return the favor and visit your page! you’ll be hearing from me soon!
nquizative
aye ness beautiful insight of poetry, i love what you’v written loook forward to reading more