Sitting

Author: bchrisdesigns
Word Count: 181
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Sitting

I wrote this poem in August of 2003 and it has gone through many tweaks since then. It has never been published and I am a little wary of putting on RB because of the First Rights issue. However, I wanted to join the Boredom Competitions on the 24/7 group’s latest competition What Moves You. I may decide to take this down after the competition or not, depending upon the response it receives. I chose this piece because, while a car and driving do “move” a person – traffic does not. So, while this poem may appear to reflect something that does not move me, it is actually depicting something that IS moving me…just at a slower pace, which is aggravating. I also think it works on two levels and has a metaphorical connection to being “moved” as well. Sometimes, what moves me not to get into the car and go is the thought of traffic and “rush hour”. I think it is also what moves many people to exhibit signs of road rage. I hope you enjoy! As always, feedback is sought and appreciated! Cheers!

CREATION INFORMATION

1. Medium: Writing – Poetry, Social Satire
2. Tools: Microsoft Word, My Brain/Imagination
3. Topic: Satire, Social Commentary, Driving

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CONTEST & CHALLENGE HISTORY

1. 04/07/08 – Written Finalist for Boredom Competitions on the 24/7’s What Moves You Competition Members can see all finalists and vote here for their favorites. Voting closes on 04/08/08.
2. 04/06/08 – Entry to Boredom Competitions on the 24/7’s What Moves You Competition

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Sitting belongs to the following groups:

All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Cars, Motorbikes and Motorsports, Humour Captured, Mysteries of the Common(2 per day), The Word Tree and Transport