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The Equation

I just read a very insightful journal entry by DanielMartin about “Writing and making things that come from the heart that maybe no body will like or things that lots of people will enjoy which is cheap and crappy but earns you more money?”

I wanted to write him a comment and found that I had more to say about it than I originally thought (and I hope this is helpful to all). Thank you, Daniel, for such a thought invoking query! Here is my response:

I find that writing form the heart means “being true to one’s heart” and, thus, true to one’s self. There are a lot of artists out there who create only for profit because money makes the world go round. And, sometimes, rightly so. I know and have lived through and seen the cost of “Bohemian lifestyles” and what a toll it takes on one’s life and the lives of those who care about them in order for one to be “All about the art” and live and breathe “Only art from the heart” (shoot, I am living that life right now at this moment…and it is bittersweet). I have battled with this concept as well and will admit that I have thought about just giving in and producing what will make the most money. But, I haven’t…yet.

I have always just produced what I liked and hoped others would like it too. I too have felt that some pieces were unpopular and that popular pieces are those that “sell out” because the artist/author is pandering to the masses and not being true to their own voice. But, maybe some of those creatives aren’t always “selling out”; maybe, they have just figured out the formula and have solved a very simple/complex equation.

Lately, I have been trying to find a certain place in my work: producing what I like and what is from the heart and, at the same time, making it what people want (and by “want”, I mean “buy”). I am slowly beginning to learn that what people want is actually to buy something from someone who believes so much so in their own work that others have no alternative but to see it as if it has come from their own hearts as well, and thus want to buy it.

What people want is passion – passion for the creation process, passion for the sales process, and passion for the way the piece speaks to the world (or what it says about that world). A photo is just a photo, a poem is just a poem, a graphic is just a graphic, until someone (meaning us creatives) shapes and molds it, and gives it meaning and purpose. Every piece we produce should evoke some sort of human emotion (other than boredom). If a piece makes someone happy…or sad…or enraged…or inspired…or ready to fight for a cause…or…you get the point… Then, we have done our jobs as creatives. It is when we get no response that we have failed (this does not literally mean “no response in our comments sections”, but rather if the piece evoked no inner response from the viewer/reader).

This is why it is so important for us creatives to offer constructive feedback and honest responses to our fellow creative comrades. To comment on someone’s work with “Excellent” or “Wow” or “Lovely” (you get the idea), might actually do us all more harm than good. Think about it. These words are filler words. I, myself, have been guilty of using them from time to time when in a rush. But they are just adjectives and they do nothing to show the workings of the inner self. Some of the best comments a creative can receive (and, I am sure most of you can attest to this) are those that give some insight into how the piece affected the viewer.

For example, these are some comments I have received which exemplify my point. I first must say, that I appreciate ANY and ALL comments on my work, even constructive criticisms. These are not necessarily my most favorite comments (though some of them very well may be), however, I randomly selected them because I feel they illustrate my above point and are very good examples:

Now, I did not mean to leave anyone out, so please do not be offended if your comment is not shown here as an example. There are just so many comments and these just popped up at me as ones that would help to make my point. If you notice, they all share a common thread: they let the creator of the piece know how their pieced affected that particular viewer. And, for an artist/writer, knowing how a piece affects another human being is worth its weight in gold. So, take this into consideration the next time you leave someone comments. I know I will try to. I am not saying to not leave the standard “Awesome” or “Excellent”, but maybe follow that up with a few words about how the piece made you feel or react. It only takes another few seconds from your busy life, but gives a world of knowledge to the person for whom you are leaving the comment. Ask yourself:

  • How did this piece make me feel/react?
  • Is the comment telling/showing how this piece made me feel/react?
  • Am I leaving this particular comment because I have nothing else to say about it?
  • Is my comment truly constructive?
  • How will this comment help the creator of the piece?
  • Am I being honest? Or, am I using filler to hide the fact that the piece caused an emotion in me that I think is not too positive (i.e. scared, afraid, creeped out, angry, enraged, turned off, sick to your stomach, etc.). [If this is the case, you can always send a private message to the creator of the piece letting them know how you feel. Remember, there is always a way to express a negative emotion in a positive way.]

So, why did I go off on this tangent about leaving comments? Because, your simple act of leaving a comment can help that artist/writer to discover what it is about their work that makes others tick. Is their work inspirational? Does it scare the viewer? Is it shocking? Does it induce fond memories? Does it convey the original emotions/feelings the artist originally intended on delivering?

How are we supposed to know these things unless we tell each other? And, most of us here are creative types, so why not use each other as tools? After all, one of the best tools of our trade is feedback. And, as artists and writers, we can take that feedback and learn to solve that ever popular equation:

What we love + What they want = Art that does not fail

What I mean by “art that does not fail”, is art that is both from the heart & soul and that also touches the hearts and souls of others. Creative pieces should accomplish both of those tasks. And keep in mind

  • If a few people think a piece is boring or it evokes no inner response…choc it up to a difference in taste
  • If A LOT of people (especially people whose opinions you highly value) think it is boring or that it evokes no inner response…try looking at your work from outside your own box and getting honest, helpful criticisms (and appreciate those criticisms, which so many of us tend NOT to do).
  • If you’re piece evokes less-positive responses, ask yourself if that was your intent. Did you mean for the piece to scare people? Were they supposed to get grossed out, or offended, or angered? If the piece upset someone or caused them to loathe what you created. Ask yourself “why?” Because, if that was the intent of your piece…then a job well done!
  • Re-examine your work often and update it (especially if it has had no response).
  • First recognize how that work makes you feel/react and then ask people if it does the same for them; if not, re-examine it and try again.
  • Ask yourself if your piece contains personal reflections that no other person, except those involved, would “get”? If so, try to re-imagine the piece so that anyone, anywhere, and at anytime can be involved with your piece and understand its meaning and relevance.
  • Read/view other works of art and keep in mind what others are saying about those pieces. Remember, the best writers are readers; the best artists are connoisseurs.
  • Remember that you should be the biggest fan of your work. If you don’t love it, then how can you expect others to? If you are not “moved” by it, then how are others expected to be?
  • And, remember, we artists and writers cannot please everyone. So, don’t even try. Just please yourself…umm…that came out bad…I mean…just know that if you build it, they will come…okay, so I went from smut to cheese, but you get the point!

Artists. Writers. Photographers. Illustrators. Poets. Sculpturers. Designers. Architects. Songwriters. Graphic Artists. Webmasters. Screenwriters. Painters. Chefs. Sketchers. Filmmakers. Assemblers. Decorators. Bakers. Playwrights. Crafters. Creators. And, “Smiths” of all kinds… The equation is OURS to solve.

Anybody got a calculator?


© Copyright Brian Jaime and bchrsidesigns, 2008. All Rights Reserved.

Note: I am posting this to ALL of my groups as it is about art/writing in general and I hope all of my fellow creative comrades will be inspired by it. Cheers! ~ b.chris

  • bchrisdesigns

    bchrisdesigns

    wow, talk about word vomit. if you read through all that and leave a comment… you are my hero!!!!!

  • WanderingAuthor

    WanderingAuthor

    I wouldn’t call that word vomit at all. Yes, perhaps you could trim it and make it shorter and still make the same point – but the most important thing is that you’ve made a very valuable point here.

    I’ve struggled with this: I want to write what I want to write, yet I also have to live (and feed my cats – they are very insistent about that :-D ). I’ve thought about various ideas to make money, and most of them just don’t work for me, because I’d feel to phony.

    But, if I can tell stories I_ want to tell, and also learn to tell them in a way that will make others want to pay me for them – that works! We don’t need a calculator – you’ve already solved the equation and found the one answer that works. Yes, we need, real, honest feedback. I think we need to understand that we will each do _far more good if we take the time to leave 2 or 3 good, informative comments a day than if we were to blast through with 100 or more “Great”s or “I love it!”s.

    I really hope you’ll think about editing this (not that it is bad – but brevity is the best way to get most people to listen) and posting it over on our discussion on Diigo. It is something we need to remember, and you’ve already proved you’ll be a valuable part of the group.

  • bchrisdesigns replied

    Wandering, I know it needs to be trimmed but it is one of those things where I have no idea where to start! LOL! It saddens me that the average person online will only read something 500 words or less because anything longer, we just do not have the time or patience for. Seems so sad and such a waste of words. I like reading long stuff, so I guess that is why I type a lot – I have a lot to say and like seeing what others have to say.

    It is also funny to me that people can pick up a writer’s amgazine and read a five page spread in one sitting, and that is ok. But, you are right, in the online world, brevity is the key to get readership. Sad, but true. But, then again, if I edit it, it might just be pandering to the masses? LOL! Would that be hypocritical of my post OR would that be solving the equation? LOL!

    Thanks for the comment! Much appreciated! Cheers!

  • Crockpot

    Crockpot

    Excellent capture of what we all needed to hear! I think many of us know this on some level but are often too lazy to access those thought processes. I hope this piece of writing inspires us all to be less lazy!! :)

  • bchrisdesigns replied

    Thanks for the comment! I never thought about it as being lazy, but now that you say that it makes me realize, that sometimes I am being lazy…wow…just got an epiphany! LOL! I hope this does inspire others!

  • CanvasMan

    CanvasMan

    Wow, long…honestly skimmed and got gist….I have found that people wanted to see artists of an area. I’m talking about tourists. I live in a river town. A major river called the Hudson River. So many people have asked me about photographs and or drawings of the Hudson River. Just because I live here doesn’t mean all my art is river related. Frustrating!

  • bchrisdesigns replied

    Thanks for the comments! I’ve never lived in a touristy town. I live in the burbs and there is nowhere arounfd here to even sell your art, other than farmer’s markets and craft fairs (which I tried, but, it seems country crafts do better arouns these parts). I always thought that living in a toursit trap of a town would be great because one could make more money. But, as you have shown, this can also be a downside for artists as well! I would imagine that would get tired after awhile hearing people only want river art. Geesh, damned if you/damned if you don’t! What’s an artist to do? LOL!

  • Miri

    Miri

    well i read it all the way thru & comments too :-).....cos what you say is so true….i try hard to practise ‘good commenting’ but yes sometimes get lazy & i know it as i write it DUH!

    it’s interesting cos spent years as a manager in large faceless organisation & i loved the coaching element of the job, seeing people grow in confidence & do things they never thought they would etc etc. i truly believe in tailoring feedback to the individual which makes it so much harder online without that personal relationship!

    my view is that if my work is out there then expect comments – good & bad but hopefully constructive…..can always choose to ignore, it’s your own work afterall & you have to be your own biggest fan!

    and another thought (ok i’m rambling now!!) but i read something that really helps with receiving any criticisms:
    “Does it make you any less you the fact that X” .....fill in the X. So:
    “Does it make you any less you the fact that so & so doesn’t like that piece?” hopefully the answer is no!

    anyway if anything you’ve made me want to try a little harder with the comments…i started with this one LOL!!!

  • DanielMartin

    DanielMartin

    Yeah i think that equation is right…. haha I agree with that but i kinda disagree with one part of it You dont have to create something people like aswell Yeah sure only do it occasionaly. I mean i think its a case of principals and as we know how would you like to be rmeebered, the one who gave all for his art or writing and produced brillaint work or the one who gave little or nothing to the world of art and ripped of something from the Simpsons or Tom and Jerry. The Problem for me is merging those two matters…. if you did you wouldnt become a defined subject in life…. only if you manged to creatre something people like but…. again i do agree partly, if you put your heart and soul and give 1000000% percent thewn it will do well o nthat alone

  • Natella2020

    Natella2020

    Not only heart and soul, but skill and effort as well. I’ve read some work, poetry and short fiction, which I could obviously tell was from the heart, but that person seemed to make no effort to improve upon the technicalities of writing. They would have no grammar, no sentence structure, even simple spelling seemed to be a waste of time. Some even become too attached to change their work.

    The words and feelings are not enough, in my opinion, but also the conveyance of the message, the layout and little effects. I believe it was Oprah who said “Love is in the details”. If a person’s hope is to make a positive impact, to make money, or to simply share a wonderous meaning, this person needs to learn to display their work and should be willing to improve upon it.

    Just my addition to your thoughtful and insightful journal. This is an important discussion because everything we do builds upon it, not just as writers/artists but as people. Thanks for posting.

  • WanderingAuthor

    WanderingAuthor

    @Natella

    I do agree with you, to a point. It is important to improve our skill, as we can. However, some writers do have a unique voice that depends on ignoring many of the usual rules. Should they change? I don’t think anyone else can make that judgment for them. And what about someone who finds it difficult or impossible to learn spelling or grammar, but who writes well and from the heart? They can always find an editor – editing skill is much easier to find than real writing talent.

    So what I’m trying to say is, I think it is important to encourage writers to develop their skills – but we also need to be gentle with those who don’t. They may have their own reasons, and they may still have something of value to contribute.

  • Natella2020

    Natella2020

    To Wandering Author,

    As you said in your reply to this entry, what we need is sincere, honest feedback. I think we all agree to a point, and have the mind to establish the time, place, and word choice of our feedback. Of course, it is always up to the writer to choose their way, but feedback can have a positve or negative effect.

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