Unfurled…… Open to the Wind
How to succeed in our journey
success over things untried
Hope for the peace
it does matter
Lost
all this blood on each side
Caring
for each of our tomorrows
Safety
as we stretch in this place
Longing
for the things of importance
Strength
as we lumber, no haste
Wishing that this never happened
Knowing there is sadness to yet feel
Hearts pleading in selfish requesting
Solutions
from whence do we heal
Unfurled
we join in with the others
Open to the wind
for each day
Blow over trials and temptations
Love one another, I say.
Memorial
( 9 / 11 )
much love to all…….
Jazzy
aka Brenda
2010
Memorial
9 / 11
The art of collecting the interesting and intriguing things of this world and bringing excitement of the possibility of “freezing” that moment in time are the reasons that my eyes have broadened to look under and over and in between the winds of the nights and the lights of the days…… Come walk beside me and we can be the “sunshine” for this season in time……….. just walk beside me…………..
Brenda
aka Jazzy
Comments
this is a great piece of writing – wonderfully expressed!
Thank you very much for reading my verse, Charmiene and for your generous comment!!! When one feels deeply about something, it seems the words seem to slip out one by one….. or that is my experience!!!
It’s nice to hear from you!!!
Brenda
– Brenda Dow
Wonderful!
How nice to have you read my work and leave me such positive support, Steffi !!!!!
Thank you so much!!!!
Brenda
– Brenda Dow
wonderful
I’m pleased that you read my work Antanas!!!! You know of which I speak….. probably your experience gives you even greater understanding than my own…… Thank you for your always great support!!!
Brenda
– Brenda Dow
thoughtful writing
Thank you for taking the time to read my verse!!!! I always wonder where my rhythm comes from….. and my thoughts….. deeper than my everyday experience….. but it is just there……….
So nice to have your support!!!!
Brenda
– Brenda Dow
Excellent thoughts very well written.
Thank you my friend …… the verse came together as I thought about the anniversary in my country and the impact around the world…. We must do the healing together….. sharing our experiences and advice!!!! I know I always have your support, Charu….. for this I am grateful!!!
Brenda
– Brenda Dow
Wonderful!!!
How nice of you to read my work, Angel…… and to give me your kind support!!!!
Thank you!!!
Brenda
– Brenda Dow
Beautiful! Such an easy task to love but it seems we fail this one so easy at times :)
Thank you Rose for your comment about loving one another…. and for taking the time to read my verse. Some days the pain of this anniversary comes back to shake us once again in our shoes….. who could have ever imagined……… horrific days……..
Brenda
– Brenda Dow
Good on you Jazzy with love always too you and may the ANGELS be on yore shoulder always
with love always Normajean.
talking in tongues for writers is like god gives us this gift to write like some can talk in many languages
It came from a source deep inside you and spilled out in your words, full of love and caring…beautiful..