G.M.

Long short walks down Muffit lane
Hiding pennies in the wall
Will they be there still when we next come back?

Those paper aeroplanes I still can’t make

Things seemed easy then but
I was younger and didn’t know
Stood on the step, smoking
Thinking, looking out at the garden

While I sat at the table inside
Counting pennies
And laughed when I said something to make fun of you
And turned it back on me
But kindly

Last time I saw you
I’d been told you were leaving
And you knew
You gave me your last bacon sandwhich, and said
“Don’t forget where you got that”
I was given a pair of your reading glasses
To remember you by

The walls have forgotten
Your penny game

But I still haven’t.


Bacchus

G.M. by

A memory locket of a truly good guy.

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Comments

  • Gretchen O'Donald
    Gretchen O'Donaldabout 3 years ago

    honest…. and descriptive. Words serve their purpose here…

  • Thanks for your positive feedback Gretchen, it means a lot!

    – Bacchus

  • zedsdead
    zedsdeadabout 3 years ago

    i love this because it’s poetic but it doesn’t sound like you’re trying to be poetic. and that is really hard to find these days. nice work.

  • Hey thanks, sorry for the late reply. I have neglected this site recently! Keep up the good work though mate, I always check your stuff when I log on, you do some great work!

    – Bacchus