Long short walks down Muffit lane
Hiding pennies in the wall
Will they be there still when we next come back?
Those paper aeroplanes I still can’t make
Things seemed easy then but
I was younger and didn’t know
Stood on the step, smoking
Thinking, looking out at the garden
While I sat at the table inside
Counting pennies
And laughed when I said something to make fun of you
And turned it back on me
But kindly
Last time I saw you
I’d been told you were leaving
And you knew
You gave me your last bacon sandwhich, and said
“Don’t forget where you got that”
I was given a pair of your reading glasses
To remember you by
The walls have forgotten
Your penny game
But I still haven’t.
Comments
honest…. and descriptive. Words serve their purpose here…
Thanks for your positive feedback Gretchen, it means a lot!
– Bacchus
i love this because it’s poetic but it doesn’t sound like you’re trying to be poetic. and that is really hard to find these days. nice work.
Hey thanks, sorry for the late reply. I have neglected this site recently! Keep up the good work though mate, I always check your stuff when I log on, you do some great work!
– Bacchus