Broken
I am merely asking for advice. :D
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Cold silence descends.
Broken promise, shattered glass.
It beats yet never mends.
With your commitment spoken,
Neither heard nor seen,
Each shred steals my reflection,
With nothing in between.
With our promise broken -
Far too late to trust.
History relived again,
As truth returns to dust.
Richard Veal
Powerful writing Claire.
Well done.
babibell replied
thanks a lot I really appreciate all your comments!
Charma Chircop
its never too late to mend things when two are in love—heartfelt emotions-Charma
babibell replied
Thanks!
Im not actually heartbroken…but Im sure thats what its like!
Richard Veal
You wont be getting any for a week.
Off to Cornwall in the morning to the place where I am hoping to have the D&C group meet.
babibell replied
enjoy!
Nancy Chambers
10-12-09
babibell replied
Wow! can’t believe it! thanks SO much!
carlotta peacock
Awesome writing gorgeous and congrats on your feature xxxxxxxx
babibell replied
Thanks very much!
xxx
MagpieMagic 29 days ago
Hard words that ring so true. Great writing.
babibell replied 28 days ago
Thanks ever so much