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The sound of violence. by ayarti

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My entry for the sound challenge.

Very much inspired by the great Joy Division album cover.

There’s a bit of time before the competition closes, so some feedback on how to improve the design would be very much appreciated!

Enjoy!

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line, white, waves, vector, lines, pattern, sound, competition, circles, challenge

I’m a young graphic designer from Melbourne with a passion for t-shirt design!

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Comments

  • Flux
    Fluxover 5 years ago

    I don’t see the need for any improvements my man. Great idea and great execution, makes or a great tee.

  • Cheers Frank. Very speedy comment!

    – ayarti

  • siriusgrafik
    siriusgrafikover 5 years ago

    quite good as it is I agree

  • Cool, thanks. I was thinking of adding a colour element or possibly a bit of type (maybe the text from the title), but i think the simplicity works for it.

    – ayarti

  • siriusgrafik
    siriusgrafikover 5 years ago

    I think the abstract minimalist thing is working well here without type…but if you were to add text I would be a little ‘reverent’ in regards to the linework

  • Miriam Shilling
    Miriam Shillingover 5 years ago

    looks great large, I would put a close up view on this page.

  • Thanks Miriam. Done and done :)

    – ayarti

  • Brozo
    Brozoover 5 years ago

    I really like it the way it is.

  • thanks!

    – ayarti

  • dencrom
    dencromover 5 years ago

    Nice tee !!

  • thank you

    – ayarti

  • hwiddy
    hwiddyover 5 years ago

    nice. for the challenge i presume?

  • clearly you didn’t read the description, hmm? for the sound challenge. big challenge like that london calling on a couple months back.

    – ayarti

  • sjem ©
    sjem ©over 5 years ago

    I find this to be a stunning abstract Ayarti, I don’t really have anything to suggest.

    The Joy Division classic cover is more 3 dimensional than this piece, but I don’t think that matters.

    Great work – sorry I missed it on my Activity Monitor earlier.

  • yanmos
    yanmosover 5 years ago

    nice work! good luck!!

  • Joy Division
    Joy Divisionover 1 year ago

    Great idea !
    I love this !!!

  • Thanks!

    – ayarti

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