Get Back to School with Redbubble – Shop Here!

The sound of violence. by ayarti


Available to buy on…

My entry for the sound challenge.

Very much inspired by the great Joy Division album cover.

There’s a bit of time before the competition closes, so some feedback on how to improve the design would be very much appreciated!




line, white, waves, vector, lines, pattern, sound, competition, circles, challenge

I’m a young graphic designer from Melbourne with a passion for t-shirt design!

View Full Profile


  • Flux
    Fluxover 5 years ago

    I don’t see the need for any improvements my man. Great idea and great execution, makes or a great tee.

  • Cheers Frank. Very speedy comment!

    – ayarti

  • siriusgrafik
    siriusgrafikover 5 years ago

    quite good as it is I agree

  • Cool, thanks. I was thinking of adding a colour element or possibly a bit of type (maybe the text from the title), but i think the simplicity works for it.

    – ayarti

  • siriusgrafik
    siriusgrafikover 5 years ago

    I think the abstract minimalist thing is working well here without type…but if you were to add text I would be a little ‘reverent’ in regards to the linework

  • Miriam Shilling
    Miriam Shillingover 5 years ago

    looks great large, I would put a close up view on this page.

  • Thanks Miriam. Done and done :)

    – ayarti

  • Brozo
    Brozoover 5 years ago

    I really like it the way it is.

  • thanks!

    – ayarti

  • dencrom
    dencromover 5 years ago

    Nice tee !!

  • thank you

    – ayarti

  • hwiddy
    hwiddyover 5 years ago

    nice. for the challenge i presume?

  • clearly you didn’t read the description, hmm? for the sound challenge. big challenge like that london calling on a couple months back.

    – ayarti

  • sjem ©
    sjem ©over 5 years ago

    I find this to be a stunning abstract Ayarti, I don’t really have anything to suggest.

    The Joy Division classic cover is more 3 dimensional than this piece, but I don’t think that matters.

    Great work – sorry I missed it on my Activity Monitor earlier.

  • yanmos
    yanmosover 5 years ago

    nice work! good luck!!

  • Joy Division
    Joy Divisionover 1 year ago

    Great idea !
    I love this !!!

  • Thanks!

    – ayarti

desktop tablet-landscape content-width tablet-portrait workstream-4-across phone-landscape phone-portrait