This story, poem or whatever it is, is so pathetic, well written, that I was moved to tears reading it !!! I’m wondering how a teenage boy can write such a beautiful story, with such delicate words feeling the pains for this old man….I was wondering how busy our teenages are, doing their own little things, very centered on themselves in a small world of their own, can write such an extraordinary story ! Your son is amazing, he feels an deep empathy for that little man, so I guess for the old people in general …this is a wonderful story Annie. Your son’s got a big heart….and you with Bailey have probably instilled that compassion into him from an early age…............
oh corinne, thank you so much for your beautiful comment. i will give it to david. i know i’m prejudice, but i think he’s a wonderful boy. aren’t we blessed to have our beautiful children?
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Corinne Pouzet
This story, poem or whatever it is, is so pathetic, well written, that I was moved to tears reading it !!!
I’m wondering how a teenage boy can write such a beautiful story, with such delicate words feeling the pains for this old man….I was wondering how busy our teenages are, doing their own little things, very centered on themselves in a small world of their own, can write such an extraordinary story ! Your son is amazing, he feels an deep empathy for that little man, so I guess for the old people in general …this is a wonderful story Annie.
Your son’s got a big heart….and you with Bailey have probably instilled that compassion into him from an early age…............
Annie Wise replied
oh corinne, thank you so much for your beautiful comment. i will give it to david. i know i’m prejudice, but i think he’s a wonderful boy. aren’t we blessed to have our beautiful children?