Safe Harbor

autumnwind
Author: autumnwind
Word Count: 163
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Safe Harbor

Just a little rhyme with incredible emotion between the words (for me). Written for one sister, dedicated to another (she knows who she is). And for all my sisters and brothers who were robbed of their childhood.

Safe Harbor belongs to the following groups:

! Creative Writing & Poetry !, **BITS and PIECES** , All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Anger Management, Childhood, Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Everyday Life, Inspired By Life, Live, Love, Dream: , The Art of Pain and The beauty of poetry

Let me tell you gently
That I hold you in my arms
I will love you as a sister
For now and ever more

I cannot give to you
Missing from the start
The rightful gift of childhood
Forever stolen from your heart

So my offer on our journey
Is what you already know
All I have and all I am
Is yours, wherever you may go

Although our lives may differ
Many miles between us too
Still the deep connecting forces
Have entwined our hearts anew

The undeserved past you leave
Has lead you to your core
You’ve found a force within yourself
Some simply can’t look for

You’re more than most will ever be
You’re love and truth and light
Your strength will never fail you now
You’re all that’s good and right

My tears fall for the scars you bear
My soul screams out in rage
If somehow I was there for you
The child I could have saved

  • Lyndy

    Lyndy

    Oh my! just wonderful my friend, i so relate to this and beautifully written L:)X

  • autumnwind replied

    Lyndy, you are an angel, you know? Thank you so, so much for all your wonderful support. Big hugs! xoxoxo

  • Anthea  Slade

    Anthea Slade

    Oh this so deeply heart felt, tender and powerful in its love and understanding. What a beautiful poem my friend Shar. Touches me oh so very, very deeply. Just beautiful. xx

  • autumnwind replied

    Anthea you are way too generous and kind. It is nothing compared to your brilliant work, however I thank you immensely for your kindness and support. That you even take the time to comment means the world to me. Big hugs, shar xoxoxo

  • rodeorose

    rodeorose

    That helpless rage we all feel, you have conveyed so beautifully Shar. For all those that failed your friend, I hope she has learned that it might be safe to trust again.You indeed offer safe harbour to her with your words and comfort. Great work Shar.

  • autumnwind replied

    What a beautiful comment. I do believe she has come very far, even further than most and trusts openly but ever cautiously, as she must. Your support means so very much. Thank you from my heart. xoxoxo

  • raymondoantonio

    raymondoantonio

    YOU HAVE A HEART OF GOLD SHAR!! YOUR SUPPORT FOR THIS PERSON AND ALL WHO HAVE BEEN ROBBED OF THEIR CHILDHOOD IS I’M SURE APPRECIATED!! XOXO

  • autumnwind replied

    thank you Raymondo for your thoughtful, heartfelt comment. always means the world to me. xoxoxo

  • en-joy

    en-joy

    I have no words to describe what I feel reading your poem!! In one way it hurts and my heart gets heavy. But then I feel the truth, love and honety behind it.
    Especially I like the love described, not between lovers, but between Friends you trust equl if man or woman!
    Thank you for sharing!

  • autumnwind replied

    Such a beautiful comment! Thank you so very much and so nice to meet you!! xoxoxo

  • Matt Penfold

    Matt Penfold

    This is such a sad yet very beautiful and touching poem Shar, it is so important that people know others care and think of them, you are obviously a wonderful friend.

  • autumnwind replied

    Your words go straight to my heart and mean so very much to me. Warmest thanks. xoxoxo

  • Trenchtownrock

    Trenchtownrock

    You are trying to get to my waterfalls with this piece Shar….and you did…so moving…so kind..the world can be such a bitch at times robbing us of precious time…totally love this.

  • autumnwind replied

    You are so wonderful. Absolutely love this comment. Thanks and hugs and love yofr way. xoxoxo

  • autumnwind replied

    darn keyboard – that was love your way. : ))

  • sandra22

    sandra22

    Shar…a very beautiful verse, that speaks so eloquently, full of heart and grace from a generous of spirit friend
    “Let me tell you gently
    That I hold you in my arms “
    love to you, sandra x

  • autumnwind replied

    Thank you dear Sandra for a most lovely comment. Sincerely means so much to me. xoxoxo

  • Kristin  Reynolds

    Kristin Reynolds

    Shar…as I sit here with fresh tears in my eyes (yesterday was spent crying the whole damn day) I shake my head in wonder at the glory that is YOU. i mean…,man! You have been such a huge gift to me, from the moment we met; have changed my life and heart in so many ways, it in inconceivable! You, I really do feel, were introduced to me as a gift from my mother; there is something about you, about us, that has always been. I know you know, i feel I’ve always known you. how else to explain it?
    I love you, soul sister. You are truly a gift immesurable. all my love and recpect, xoxoxoox Kristin :)
    (thank you!)

  • autumnwind replied

    ok, and now you are making me cry. wow, I am so loving and appreciating the love as I drink it in like a magic elixir. I am sorry to hear about your yesterday tears, and/or any tears you shed unless they are those of joy. yes, you are my sister, and yes I know, have known the connection we share is timeless. Before, now and to be. The greatest love, respect and admiration goes back to you, and you know I am always here, in any way I can be for you. love you with all my heart for always. xoxoxo

  • Kristin  Reynolds

    Kristin Reynolds

    shit. lol that should say, RESPECT. how do i always manage to F it up? lol

  • autumnwind replied

    lol I hate we cant fix our typos here. btw, I am order laughter, smiles and lots of love for the day! : )) xoxoxo

  • autumnwind replied

    talk about typos – that was ordering duh : ))

  • James Watson

    James Watson

    Thank you for posting this work.

  • autumnwind replied

    wow, thank YOU for the lovely comment. love, shar xoxoxo

  • Teacup

    Teacup

    Its so beautiful, gentle and giving what you have written for another. You have an open heart and an insight into a terrible injustice to many when so young. x

  • autumnwind replied

    Aww, thanks so, so much. Sadly, I do know what I wish never happened. A lovely comment from a beautiful heart. xoxoxo

  • lianne

    lianne

    Shar my dear – this is so heartfelt, so beautiful and so completely perfect that it’s difficult to find adjectives to express how deeply it moves me. Your friend/sister – soulmate perhaps – is blessed to have you in her corner as her loving advocate. Your compassion (which is NOT pity) and empathy shines out of this poem with so much love, it’s palpable. What rich and tender insight you have, Shar. Some of us have been lucky enough to find one friend like this in our entire lives – and some of us have made that connection right here on RB – and for myself and all the others for whom that is the case, whether their pain comes from this kind of childhood trauma or some other loss in life, I thank you for this beautiful gift today. xox

  • autumnwind replied

    Oh gosh Lianne, what an incredibly beautiful comment. I am honored by your words, and touched by your thoughtful, deeply caring heart. You are a treasure, and this means more to me than you know. With love and sincere appreciation, shar xoxoxo

  • JaneSolomon

    JaneSolomon

    Oh Shar this is absolutely beautiful and touched me to the very core of my being. You are such a kind, wonderful person. So many children do have their childhoods stolen and struggle through life with so many issues, often into later life and some never resolve much. Your words from such an understanding heart. Thank you for this beautiful write. xxxx

  • autumnwind replied

    Oh Jane, your comment means so very much to me. I thank you with all my heart and I am so glad you are here. love and hugs, shar xoxoxo

  • Danceintherain

    Danceintherain

    what beauty in your words … the love is very clear.
    • Coy *
  • autumnwind replied

    very beautiful comment. with sincere and warm appreciation, shar xoxoxo

  • wingsoffire

    wingsoffire

    This is incredibly beautiful, I can so relate to your words here, family is important all we wish to do is be there for them. This is spoken from a loving heart.

  • autumnwind replied

    I am so touched by your lovely comment. Warmest thanks and big hugs, shar xoxoxo

  • wigs

    wigs

    this brings tears to my eyes…... you truly are a wonderful caring person…. loving and totally understanding ….I want to give you a big hug xxxx

  • autumnwind replied

    Aww, you are making me tear up here. Thank you sweet friend. Means so very much to me. Hugging you back, big time. xoxoxo

  • Christie  Moses

    Christie Moses

    Your heart is so precious Shar. It shines light the brightest star. What a priceless tribute to I’m sure a very deserving soul. Love to always xoxoxxo

  • autumnwind replied

    I love you so much Christie, every comment you leave, every word you write means the world to me. xoxoxo

  • Christie  Moses

    Christie Moses

    Did I forget to mention I’m choked up now and tears are in my eyes. You are truly the best and this is like the hug I am sure this person needed. Just had to come back and say that. LOVE YOU xoxoxo

  • autumnwind replied

    ok, now you’ve done it. can’t see what I’m typing. love you, love you. thank you for being the beautiful friend you are. you are killing me here with emotion. : )) you are the best. major hugs, big love forever. xoxoxo

  • musbah alkbir

    musbah alkbir

    very beautiful words and has emotioal deoth love it…

  • autumnwind replied

    aww, thank you so, so much! warmest and most sincere appreciation. love, shar xoxoxo

  • wigs

    wigs

    For having a heart so big, for sharing and caring….congratulations

  • autumnwind replied

    WOW!!!! I am going to cry once again. Deeply honored. Means so very much to me. You are so kind to do this, and I am deeply grateful. Thank you from my heart of hearts. xoxoxoxoxoxo

  • Lyndy

    Lyndy

    Oh so well done and soooo deserved! L:)X

  • autumnwind replied

    Thank you sweet Lyndy. You are a joy! HUGS!! XOXOXO

  • happyfeet5

    happyfeet5

    Beatfiful, absolutely beautiful. If we could take all the pain of those whose childhood was taken away from them. But it pains me that we cannot but just offer our comfort and hope that it will help in the healing process. Thanks for the beautiful heart you have and for sharing. Shar. Iris

  • autumnwind replied

    sorry to be so late with this reply – warmest thanks for such a heartfelt comment. hugs and love, shar xoxoxo

  • billfox256

    billfox256

    “The leaves of memory seemed to make a mournful rustling in the dark.”
    Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

    Beautifully written, Bill

  • autumnwind replied

    thank you so, so much Bill. Incredible quote!!! Hugs, shar xoxoxo

  • Andrew Bailey

    Andrew Bailey

    I am growing my arms long enough to give you a big hug. Lovely stuff and very emotional. xx

  • autumnwind replied

    Aww, so,so sweet, Sorry for this late reply, as you know I’ve been so busy, hope to be free later today. Warmest thanks!! xoxoxo

  • Debbie Sandersfeld

    Debbie Sanders...

    very well written, love this work, has meaning for so many.

  • autumnwind replied

    Thank you so, so much dear Debbie. Yes, so sadly too many can relate. Hugs, shar xoxoxo

  • Cee Neuner

    Cee Neuner

    Beautiful work…...

  • autumnwind replied

    Warmest thanks Cee! Sorry for the late reply. Hope to be back on site today! Hugs! xoxoxo

  • JRGarland

    JRGarland

    What a Godsent you are to all the souls you touch. You reach out to so many even when focussing on the one. Such a heart is worthy of respect and love. Even the hosts of heaven is standing and applauding you. You’re the best.

  • autumnwind replied

    Oh JR, I do believe this is the most touching comment ever received. A testament to the warm and loving soul you are. Cannot thank you enough. Much love and big hugs, shar xoxoxo

  • linaji

    linaji

    YOUR DEDICATION AND COMPASSION are felt .. and SHINE.. you are the ‘best’!

  • autumnwind replied

    a warm and beautiful comment that I take to heart and appreciate so, so much. thank you sweet lady. xoxoxo

  • erich biemer

    erich biemer

    strength in beauty…...

  • autumnwind replied

    to say you have a way with words would be putting it mildly. awesome comment going straight to my heart. thank you so, so much. xoxoxo

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty

    Gregory John O...

    brilliant piece !!!!

  • autumnwind replied

    that is way too kind, but I thank you dearly. : )) hugs! xoxoxo

  • marieangel

    marieangel

    congrats on your well desrved feature…i have only just been introduced to your lovely work but I can relate to special friendships often stronger than family…....i feel your work in progress and the special connection you have….i beieve in life what goes round comes round so i gift you my imagination of a childhood carousel…with ligh organ music and laughter and friendship…embrace it now even if for a few moments and alow this to be embedded in your memory when and if you need it…for we all need to connect with our child within….even as adults and if robbed of this we can create new images to take us to safe shores..Thank you for sharing ..angelx

  • autumnwind replied

    thank you for taking the time for such a beautiful comment! means so very much to me. lovely to meet you! love, shar xoxoxo

  • Solar Zorra

    Solar Zorra

    Oh Shar this is so beautiful. I hope your sister feels all of the love wrapped up in this.
    Congratulations on the feature….........well deserved. XX :) Solar

  • Coronus

    Coronus


    Shar this was incredibly powerful.

  • autumnwind replied

    Wow! Sorry to be so late with a reply – just back on now and what a lovely surprise!!! Overwhelmed to find you have chosen it as a feature. This means so very much to me. I am deeply honored. Much love love aand thanks frfom my heart, xoxoxo

  • autumnwind replied

    sorry for all those typos – had a rough night. : )) THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!

  • tkrosevear

    tkrosevear

    I can feel the safe harbor within your words my sister, for all who’ve lost their childhood, yesterday, today and tomorrow – your compassion is timeless and felt deeply ;) xoxox TK ♥

    Congrats on the feature too!!!

  • autumnwind replied

    sis, your words mean more to me than you will ever know. straight from your beautiful heart touching mine forever. love you. xoxoxo

  • autumnwind replied

    forgot to say thank you : )) – thank you sooooooooooo much. xoxoxo

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    beautiful and touching ! wow … everyone above me has said it all .. i just read this and smiled…
    great tribute and anyone is lucky to have your friendship
    peace

  • autumnwind replied

    a beautiful comment from a beautiful heart and soul. means so very much to me. thank you my sweet friend. hugs to you. xoxoxo

  • Rhenastarr

    Rhenastarr

    How touchingly beautiful, touched me deeply my friend. Congrats on your more than well deserved features.

  • autumnwind replied

    Thank you so sincerely!!! Hugs to you! xoxoxo

  • RosaCobos

    RosaCobos

    It can be so good.. so good.
    I beleive that one has found a harbor when one is understood.
    And one is understood when one does not feel ….fear.
    The ones I fear….they bring me war.
    Even they do not try to hurt me…they do.
    And then…when one is seing that the stolen is returned
    what bliss is greater?
    I would love to “know” the whole story…being simple..
    is so intimate and common to all of us.
    But I will leave it, there… for your inside mirror.
    Rosa (congratulations on this piece of heart. And receive a hug from me, Shar)

  • autumnwind replied

    Your hug is dearly embraced, precious Rosa. Warmest thanks from my heart to yours. xoxoxo

  • Joyce Dickens, IPA

    Joyce Dickens,...

    My dear sweet Shar…I echo everything that has been said, though I must say say it again…you are a true blessing, a wonderful spirit so full of compassion, love of life, and energies that abound in all directions….you are so gifted and blessed with an awesome ability to think, compose and write so elequently….so heartfelt. I know without a doubt that your friend must be feeling your compassion, determination and love, and she will eventualy learn to trust once again….of all things in life, this is probably the most hard – it means giving of yourself in every way….we all have tendancies, I believe to build walls to protect ourselves, our families, and yet those walls can also be our ultimate defeat…...thank you sweet heart for your abilites and strengths to convey what you feel; the features which you so deserve are an honor that though it may seem a small token…it is truly huge, as others read and are moved so deeply by your incredible writings….with love and the utmost respect…Joyce

  • autumnwind replied

    Dear Joyce, you are way too generous and kind. What an incredible comment that fills with me overflowing joy and lifts my spirits to the sky. You are just too good to me, and for that I am overwhelmed and dearly grateful. Wow. Thank you, and just know I have mutual respect for you, which I hope you already know. My thank you seems quite insufficient, but I do thank you, and hope you feel my sincerest gratitude and love. Warmest wishes and giant hugs, shar XOXOXO

  • Susan Trigg

    Susan Trigg

    This is deeply moving! I don’t have a sister, but I do have an old and dear friend who is like a sister, and you could have written this for me to read to her, it is so apt. Thank you for once again putting into words the things we feel in our hearts :)

  • autumnwind replied

    thank you so much for this beautiful comment. the sister I refer to is a friend, a soul sister if you will, as is the one I dedicated it to. so sincerely appreciate your thoughtful words. love, shar xoxoxo

  • msdebbie

    msdebbie

    Lovely Shar – this is beautiful and so deserving of all features, many faves and wonderful comments! I was especially drawn to these lines:
    Still the deep connecting forces
    Have entwined our hearts anew

  • autumnwind replied

    Oh wow, you are too kind. So warmly and sincerely appreciate your lovely comment! Hugs to you sweet friend! love, shar xoxoxo

  • hsien-ku

    hsien-ku

    heartfelt and beautiful words. your writing is very moving, elegant.

  • autumnwind replied

    oh wow, thank you so kindly. sincerely appreciate your comment! xoxoxo

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Beautifully written Sha and to rhyme …........... your words convey a soulful friendship and full of kind and loving emotions. You are a lady of verse and soul and it shines thro’ so finely! I love your peotry! – David

  • autumnwind replied

    OMG You are making my day!!! Cannot thank you enough for your wonderful support and encouragement!!! Giant hugs your way! XOXOXOXO

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Woops I forgot to say Congratulations on your two wonderful features which are so worthy os such brilliance! – David

  • autumnwind replied

    wow – you are killing me with the happies here. so, so kind of you. overwhelmed. thank you sweet friend. xoxoxo

  • ArcadiaTempest

    ArcadiaTempest

    Shar…..I read this and immediately knew there was a real longing in you to hug this person….you did me thinks with the words here…just so beautiful to see the out working of friendship… Friendship deep like this makes me feel there is more hope in this world….XXX

  • autumnwind replied

    this is a beautiful comment. yes, hugging with words as she is so far away. glad it is felt. thank you, thank you. xoxoxo

  • trwoody

    trwoody

    An honest heartfelt tale of compassion….truly there is no greater sin than the theft of the innocence of childhood. The atrocities against children are heinous, particularly when committed by ones in charge of nurturing and protecting. Yes it does make us want to hug them all and give Safe Harbor

  • autumnwind replied

    a heartfelt comment., I so dearly appreciate. thank you from my heart. xoxoxo

  • autumnwind replied

    ok, I need another cup of coffee, sort of a redundant reply with typos. sorry!!! warmest thanks and hugs. xoxoxo

  • Honky

    Honky

    Had I not been at the library, struggling to hold back tears, they would have ran down my face. Keep up such magnificent writing. When you can get to the core of many hearts then you have completed your task as a writer. Taking people to where you want them to go. Great piece, I look forward to reading more of your work.

  • autumnwind replied

    wow, such a lovely compliment, thank you so, so much. it is truly the greatest feeling to know my writing has touched someone so. a most wonderful comment sincerely appreciated. love, shar xoxoxo

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