This Poem Is Not Controversial
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it has no enemies
does not want to argue
defend one point
or attack another
this poem is at peace
it exists
past opposites
beyond contradictions
it has but love to offer
feels no need
to name
the nameless
between words
in the spaces around letters
this poem
shines
© Assef Al-Jundi
Philosophy Lee
Oh yeah! Very well done. I LOVE it!
Assef Al-Jundi replied
Grateful my new friend for the comment, and for Favoring this poem~
NoraFraser
effective writing
Assef Al-Jundi replied
thank you
Nathan Walraven
Well written, very ncie
Assef Al-Jundi replied
I appreciate that~
thank you
Banin Jafar
very nice, love it…
Assef Al-Jundi replied
delighted to hear it
shukran…
Banin Jafar
Afwan :)
When I saw the “shukran” I took a pause….huh?!!
then I looked at ur name, and I was like duhhhh lol
Assef Al-Jundi replied
originally your neighbor to the west- from Damascus (Demashq)
I added the Arabic letters for my name in the profile just for you ; )
(you gave me the idea)
Salamat
Banin Jafar
Wallah you’re from Syria, Demashq is my home….I lived there for a while, and I still visit every once in a while :) Plus, I am going to be there next month inshallah!
I gave you the idea?! anyways thanks for adding them, feeling special here lol
Good night
Assef Al-Jundi replied
Ahlain wa’sahlane…. marhaba.. I read that you were born in Iraq and assumed that you are from there…
The idea?! Let us call it the inspiration! the ilham ; )
safe travels, and hope to talk again soon… et’sharfna
Banin Jafar
Yeah I am originaly from Iraq, but I left there when I was very little in 1990, you know war time..so, ahleen feek, o el-Sharaf be ma’reftak khaio :)
Assef Al-Jundi replied
big grin on my face imagining you saying “khaio” LOL it has been a long time…
Yes, many wars in that tired land, and its people… peace is so overdue, for everybody!!
sorry to keep you up… tesbahi ala khair
Banin Jafar
Big grin!! its not like saying “ibn ‘ami” ...yallah roll 1,2,3 roll on the floor laughing LOL :)
Walla people got sick and tired of waiting for the peace that doesn’t seem to happen in the near future at all…
Yallah salam …o enta min ahlo khaio :P
Sally Omar
Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Assef Al-Jundi replied
deeply thankful (at least as deep as all the exclamation marks) ; )
In peace~
linaji
Forgive me for not taking the time with you.. I have seen your work in ADAWG.. ATTACHED TO PHOTOS AND ART.. BUt.. I have never just come here… this is profound writing and touches me deeply as I have had to write like the wind to allow for my heart to break.. This is really where my true love lies.. in the space between the in and the out breath.. the glue that is the unknowable.. only to gradually be known.. and then.. beyond the expansive and forever unknowable once again… Your kind poets heart and Soul is celebrated by this sister.. xoxoxo
Assef Al-Jundi replied
what a wonderful comment… You are uplifting my spirit higher this evening ; )
“True love”, and “the glue that is the unknowable”... this poet wants to celebrate with you ; )
truly grateful, and thanks for making the poem a Favorite of yours…
hsien-ku
i would give my whole life to be this poem.
it has everything necessary.
Assef Al-Jundi replied
That is a most wonderful thing to say,
and I am sure you are aware of the inherent contradiction (irony!) in that statement….
Thankful~
Gregory John O...
Nice !!
Wayne Cook
Congratulations!!!!!
Assef Al-Jundi replied
thank you very much…
Ushna Sardar
Assef Al-Jundi replied
honored, and grateful, indeed…
gemini63
This is very clever :)
Assef Al-Jundi replied
best cleverness is the kind that comes without trying…
many thanks~
sandra22
just lovely :))
Assef Al-Jundi replied
delighted you enjoyed it…
msdebbie
Indeed, a shining example of why we should all seek a little less controversy, dramas and anxiety in our lives. Beautiful poem xoxo
Assef Al-Jundi replied
yes, tranquility is a beautiful thing…
Cheers~
Quinn Blackburn
Beautiful wordcrafting! Poetic agenda
:) wishing you laughter
Assef Al-Jundi replied
Thank you very much…
wishing you laughter and peace~