Two

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Author: artyfifi
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Two

For a dear friend who finally met her match. x

Two belongs to the following groups:

The Word Tree

Smile me that smile
of yours that wipes
away a grey day
lighting it
with warmth,
love,
and beauty

Laugh out loud
that my soul might
hear your music
infectious,
full of mirth
and mischief

I cannot imagine
my life
without you
I am lost

Love is
where we two
live together
let us never leave.

© FCS 2008

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    So beautifully written straight from your heart …...... this is definately a favourite for me! – David :>))

  • artyfifi

    artyfifi

    Aw thank you : )

  • Astoreth

    Astoreth

    gorgeous and nothing is more wonderful and exciting than hearing someone you love really laugh…xxxx

  • artyfifi replied

    Aw thx Astoreth, so true ; ) xx

  • Samuel Vega

    Samuel Vega

    This brought out such nice emotion. You have a good soul… thanks for sharing these bits of it through your writing.

  • artyfifi replied

    Thank you Samuel. What a lovely thing to say. :)

  • Gonzeli

    Gonzeli

    I really enjoyed this; your crafting of language into such a small piece as this is wonderful. “infectious” and “mischief” are two words that resonate with everyone and really make this a piece that not just the couple you wrote it for can enjoy.
    Also! The subjective character of the story sounds incredible!

  • artyfifi replied

    Thank you Gonzeli. What a lovely comment : )

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