Things I have written, fairly recently, which are, obviously, based on Tale of Two Cities by Charles Dickens; but, which have also, obviously, taken a weird turn. lol
This is only a rough draft and I may add a lot to it, on either end or straight through the middle. I’d be glad to hear your impressions, feelings, critique, or etc.
To me, currently, it is lacking. I am still feeling my way through the story, so, I don’t feel any deep connection to it. Usually, I just write what is there in me, without trying to formulate it to absolutely resemble or follow anything. In the end, I may abandon the project, take what is written and run mad with it (thought not in the streets), in my own way and time, but, I am trying to discipline myself in this way.
Also, I may add some stuff tha…