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The Other Day I Fell in Love

The other day I fell in love
Suddenly, surprisingly, spontaneously

The kind of love that gathers critical mass
Seductively becoming fleshed

The other day
I fell in love
Astoundingly
With someone that I have not yet met

And this love
Might last
A lifetime

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  • pinkstinks
    pinkstinksabout 7 years ago

    Nice – I like the twist – that you have not met them yet.

  • Robert Knapman
    Robert Knapmanabout 7 years ago

    Thanks (and welcome :)) Bianca. Its wierd but true – it still resonates. Happenned while dropping off to sleep the other night. Am I a freak?

  • mayuphoto
    mayuphotoabout 7 years ago

    Beautiful poem – I empathize with all words..it echos in my heart.

  • Damian
    Damianabout 7 years ago

    What a wonderful idea! I liked it a lot :)

  • Robert Knapman
    Robert Knapmanabout 7 years ago

    Thanks mayuphoto and Damian – maybe we are all constantly falling in love without realising it?

  • pinkelephant
    pinkelephantabout 7 years ago

    I love the simplicity of the repetition in this one, very effective – lends a charming, innocent quality to the writing.

  • Robert Knapman
    Robert Knapmanabout 7 years ago

    Thanks pinky. I think love is all those things too ,)

  • marieancolie
    marieancolieabout 7 years ago

    Everything has been written .. so what can I say more ??
    This sounds as a serenade, as a waltz.. beautiful Robert. So somple, but so charming, so effective.

  • Robert Knapman
    Robert Knapmanabout 7 years ago

    Thanks Marie. Ahh waltz – what a lovely idea. Like lots of people here, I know you really mean it when you comment ,)

  • Popular Mr
    Popular Mrabout 7 years ago

    I can so relate to everything that is written

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