Tattooed
A writen piece for a challenge in the Gay Sexuality group. This written work goes with Gordon Merrick Justice’s image which was inspired by it. The next stage in this group’s challenge is for me to create a visual piece to go with some of his writing.
Tattooed belongs to the following groups:
All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Gay Men and Love & RomanceSend for the Prince
That I might tell him
That I have no need
Of ships
Laden with gold thread
Nor plush ebony silks
Draped now
Over his smooth
Moonlit
Nubile body
Tell him
That I am greater than his
Ruby moist lips
Parting for my pleasure,
Greater than the emerald
In the deep oceans of his
Jewelled eyes
Greater than his turrets
His drawbridges
His pedestals and thrones
His kingdom
Tell him
That like a forest tree seed
Scattered and falling,
Riding
On soft lashed wings
Strident in its assertions
To home
That I am marked
By love
And further
That love
Has me marked
Has me tattooed
Butt naked and thirsty
For life
Joe Valcourt/M...
great !
butchart
robert… i won’t bog you down w/ comments..wonderful…see forum for my real comment…......b
Asmah Najib
Wow… this is increadible.
I love the mood you set throughout your piece
Mel Brackstone
Phew, I’m breathless!
MissKristy
Ooooooh…..speechless…
missalyshachri...
jeeezohman :)
youve got a hella good talent
tonilouise
oh wow..
Robert Knapman
Thanks everyone. I just read this once more and it sent shivers down my spine – again. Thats a damn good sign ;))
SuliHawk
Such beautiful images you painted with these words, rich with rubies, emeralds, gold and emotion.
pixie3
Wow!!! so beautiful.
lolowe
This is really great work. I love it!
MaryK
Great!
Robert Knapman
Thank you all you tattoo lovers .)
PJ Ryan
oh yeh !!
... i wish castles and castles of love to you :)
Robert Knapman replied
Thank you – that’s just made me smile :)
lianne
this is so remarkable, so astonishingly good it leaves me quite speechless. There is the most exquisite rhythm here to accompany these romantic, evocative and sensual images, it carries one just as if one is riding the wave of love itself. Exquisitely beautiful and passionate poem.
Robert Knapman replied
Thankyou lianne. I’m really honoured by your comment and that you’ve enjoyed this so much. That is one hellofa fine compliment. Thankyou. Sometime writing poetry hurts as much, or is as liberating as the feelings / emotions behind it (whether its joyous, sad or otherwise). Love it .)
lianne
I totally agree with you Robert – now I’m going to follow this challenge and see where it led since I love Merrick’s writing as well!
Robert Knapman
Here is the writing for the current project. And here and the new group projevct instructions. Here is the final result of project 1. Just for your viewing pleasure .) Cheers lianne.
LadyFire
What a beautiful play on words. Good show sir, good show indeed ;-)
mistletoes
Excellent!!!!!
Robert Knapman
Thank you Mr Mistletoes .)
JonoCarrick
This is absolutely sensual, descriptive and just beautiful.
BiographyofRed8
wow.. so sexy.. and adventurious.. love it!!
Astoreth
great writing, I really enoyed reading it….’Butt naked and Thirsty for life’ .....wonderful. xx