Tattooed

Robert Knapman
Author: Robert Knapman
Word Count: 115
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Send for the Prince
That I might tell him
That I have no need
Of ships
Laden with gold thread

Nor plush ebony silks
Draped now
Over his smooth
Moonlit
Nubile body

Tell him
That I am greater than his
Ruby moist lips
Parting for my pleasure,
Greater than the emerald
In the deep oceans of his
Jewelled eyes

Greater than his turrets
His drawbridges
His pedestals and thrones
His kingdom

Tell him
That like a forest tree seed
Scattered and falling,
Riding
On soft lashed wings
Strident in its assertions
To home

That I am marked
By love

And further
That love
Has me marked
Has me tattooed

Butt naked and thirsty
For life

Tattooed

A writen piece for a challenge in the Gay Sexuality group. This written work goes with Gordon Merrick Justice’s image which was inspired by it. The next stage in this group’s challenge is for me to create a visual piece to go with some of his writing.

Tattooed belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Gay Themed Art and Writing and Love & Romance
  • JOSEPH VALCOURT/ MODERNUS PHOTOGRAPHIC ARTWORK

    JOSEPH VALCOUR..., 7 months ago

    great !

  • butchart

    butchart, 7 months ago

    robert… i won’t bog you down w/ comments..wonderful…see forum for my real comment…......b

  • Asmah Najib

    Asmah Najib, 7 months ago

    Wow… this is increadible.

    I love the mood you set throughout your piece

  • Mel Brackstone

    Mel Brackstone, 7 months ago

    Phew, I’m breathless!

  • Kristy Lee

    Kristy Lee, 7 months ago

    Ooooooh…..speechless…

  • missalyshachristine

    missalyshachri..., 7 months ago

    jeeezohman :)
    youve got a hella good talent

  • tonilouise

    tonilouise, 7 months ago

    oh wow..

  • Robert Knapman

    Robert Knapman, 7 months ago

    Thanks everyone. I just read this once more and it sent shivers down my spine – again. Thats a damn good sign ;))

  • SuliHawk

    SuliHawk, 7 months ago

    Such beautiful images you painted with these words, rich with rubies, emeralds, gold and emotion.

  • pixie3

    pixie3, 6 months ago

    Wow!!! so beautiful.

  • lolowe

    lolowe, 6 months ago

    This is really great work. I love it!

  • MaryK

    MaryK, 6 months ago

    Great!

  • Robert Knapman

    Robert Knapman, 6 months ago

    Thank you all you tattoo lovers .)

  • Nicole Ryan

    Nicole Ryan, 6 months ago

    oh yeh !!

    ... i wish castles and castles of love to you :)

  • Robert Knapman

    Robert Knapman in reply to Nicole Ryan’s comment, 6 months ago

    Thank you – that’s just made me smile :)

  • lianne

    lianne, 5 months ago

    this is so remarkable, so astonishingly good it leaves me quite speechless. There is the most exquisite rhythm here to accompany these romantic, evocative and sensual images, it carries one just as if one is riding the wave of love itself. Exquisitely beautiful and passionate poem.

  • Robert Knapman

    Robert Knapman in reply to lianne’s comment, 5 months ago

    Thankyou lianne. I’m really honoured by your comment and that you’ve enjoyed this so much. That is one hellofa fine compliment. Thankyou. Sometime writing poetry hurts as much, or is as liberating as the feelings / emotions behind it (whether its joyous, sad or otherwise). Love it .)

  • lianne

    lianne, 5 months ago

    I totally agree with you Robert – now I’m going to follow this challenge and see where it led since I love Merrick’s writing as well!

  • Robert Knapman

    Robert Knapman, 5 months ago

    Here is the writing for the current project. And here and the new group projevct instructions. Here is the final result of project 1. Just for your viewing pleasure .) Cheers lianne.

  • LadyFire

    LadyFire, about 1 month ago

    What a beautiful play on words. Good show sir, good show indeed ;-)

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