Repetitive Strain Injury
His lover
Takes his hand
Then takes him…out
Wham! Bang!
Like the secret punishment
Of a repetitive strain injury
Like a tsumani
In the night
His lover
Takes his hand
Then takes him…out
Wham! Bang!
Like the secret punishment
Of a repetitive strain injury
Like a tsumani
In the night
Comments
well I just adore the ambiguity of this verse,
first read, I thought he actually took him out – dead…
second read, was slightly more sensual :)
Spot on Lisa – seuality and violence hand in hand :)
– Robert Knapman
wham! bang! impressive…x
:-) Thianks WWL
– Robert Knapman
I thought this was going to be about carpel tunnel and suggest emu oil lol!
Fantastic verse Robert and great to see you around the bubble;)
LOL…tricked ya! Thanks Shanina. Nice to be here.
– Robert Knapman
This made me smile :)
:)
– Robert Knapman
brilliant in it’s simplicity :))
:)) Thanks SimplyRed
– Robert Knapman