There was a momentWhen I really did think You were real
It was the poke that did itDisintergrating you right then and there…
wow, powerful imagery…but sad too.
yes, dreams, fantasies, desires, they are all too easily punctured
maybe the moment lives stronger than the poke – heartfelt :)
this has few words, but says so much.. having a deep undercurrent, especially in the disintergration
Sad but necessary. Really visual, emotional writing.
short, simple and smart.. i love it! ;D
yup LOL! perfect xoxox
beautiful but sad.