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When Love Comes

In the back of his head
A thought wants out

Escape artist crazy
desperate

Like love
Breathless
Lashed and bound to a dated time machine

He said
We’d live forever
As I held him
Tightly in a dirty city dawn

He said, he said he loved me
And I fed on his words
Drinking him down

Bang Bang
Fool

In the back of his head
An inner sanctum thought
With ruffled feathers
Wants out

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I just showed this to my house mate and got some very interesting feedback. I’d be very curious to hear your thoughts or interpretation – good, bad or indifferent. Thanks

Comments

  • marieancolie
    marieancolieabout 7 years ago

    I love this poem so much Robert.
    To better understand I had to read it few times.
    Very sensitive, many soft and strong and also warm feelings.
    Blessings to you ;)

  • missalyshachristine
    missalyshachristineabout 7 years ago

    very powerful piece.
    youre so talented robert.
    i love when theres much unsaid in a poem, you know?
    some things you have to read into…like yours
    i very much enjoyed it =]

  • Nikolay Semyonov
    Nikolay Semyonovabout 7 years ago

    as stunning as your photography

  • Robert Knapman
    Robert Knapmanabout 7 years ago

    Thanks Marie, Miss A and SNik. Responses to my words is somehow more important than the images smetimes. There’s something more fundamental and real about writing in many ways. Thanks .)

  • MissKristy
    MissKristyabout 7 years ago

    Yes…powerful emotion.
    I am taking more from it each time I read it over again. I love writing that is so open to interpretation, yet co clear and direct in some ways also.
    Very nicely balanced.

  • Aritheeagle
    Aritheeagleover 3 years ago

    “In the back of his head
    An inner sanctum thought
    With ruffled feathers
    Wants out”

    Oh yeah ….. this is the only way to express the feeling!

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